Humbled...
God's love is humbling through genuine remorse.7 total reviews
Comment from dragonpoet
This is a well written acrostic poem about how one feels through the stages of
the sacrament of reconciliation. It shows how humbling God'a love is.
Hope it did well in the contest. The artwork reminds be of a Picasso for it
seems cubist in nature.
Keep writing
Joan
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2018
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This is a well written acrostic poem about how one feels through the stages of
the sacrament of reconciliation. It shows how humbling God'a love is.
Hope it did well in the contest. The artwork reminds be of a Picasso for it
seems cubist in nature.
Keep writing
Joan
Comment Written 14-May-2018
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2018
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I appreciate your read and review.
Blessings,
brigitte
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No problem.
Joan
Comment from Bill Schott
This acrostic poem, HUMBLED, follows the vertical theme and points out the position of brokenness we must come to in order to genuinely be receptive to the Holy Spirit. Nice poem.
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2018
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This acrostic poem, HUMBLED, follows the vertical theme and points out the position of brokenness we must come to in order to genuinely be receptive to the Holy Spirit. Nice poem.
Comment Written 24-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2018
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Thank you for your lovely words. You are are fan I rely on. Be honest and tell how I can improve.
Blessings,
Brigitte
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This spiritual poem speaks God's appreciation and love and wishes to be humbled in living, well said and well done; thanks for sharing this acrostic poem with us; good luck with the contest. DR ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2018
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This spiritual poem speaks God's appreciation and love and wishes to be humbled in living, well said and well done; thanks for sharing this acrostic poem with us; good luck with the contest. DR ALCREATOR
Comment Written 22-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2018
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As always, I appreciate the read and lovely comments. This one came from the heart. I think my style is coming back.
Thank you,
Mystery Writer
Comment from kiwigirl2821
Wonderful write ... I think it could be stronger by bolding that first letter to each line and by making the type just a bit larger. I once asked my priest why we had to come to confession instead of directly to the Man. He said the priest acts as head of the family. When one of us sin it brings sin to all and the priest forgives for all of the family. Catholics are strange birds some times. Enjoyed your acrostic piece. Good luck. xoxo Kiwi
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2018
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Wonderful write ... I think it could be stronger by bolding that first letter to each line and by making the type just a bit larger. I once asked my priest why we had to come to confession instead of directly to the Man. He said the priest acts as head of the family. When one of us sin it brings sin to all and the priest forgives for all of the family. Catholics are strange birds some times. Enjoyed your acrostic piece. Good luck. xoxo Kiwi
Comment Written 22-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2018
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Thank you for reading and the lovely comments. So, you are Catholic also. Glad you enjoyed the poem, it came from the heart.
Will consider your suggestions.
:)
Thank you,
Mystery Writer
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lol ok then B. xx d
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think this is an interesting story for the 'Acrostic Poem' writing prompt.
A good message in your verse. Well done.
Good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2018
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I think this is an interesting story for the 'Acrostic Poem' writing prompt.
A good message in your verse. Well done.
Good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon
Comment Written 22-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2018
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Thank you for reading and the lovely review.
Mystery writer
Comment from NaughtieScribe
The messaging in this work is un-convoluted and thought provoking. While I found one passage that pulled me from the rhythm of your prose.
i.e. - Beholding my uttered shameful remorse for transgressions - Utter as in absolute or total, or Uttered as in spoken or expressed?
I found nothing major that would take away from the reverence of your work as a whole. Keep going and loving what your do.
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2018
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The messaging in this work is un-convoluted and thought provoking. While I found one passage that pulled me from the rhythm of your prose.
i.e. - Beholding my uttered shameful remorse for transgressions - Utter as in absolute or total, or Uttered as in spoken or expressed?
I found nothing major that would take away from the reverence of your work as a whole. Keep going and loving what your do.
Comment Written 22-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2018
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Thank you for reading and the lovely comments. I may change that verb to be clearer with meaning. I did mean expressed.
:)Blessings,
Brigitte
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Does confessed work better than uttered?
Brigitte
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Nope, I just wasn't sure which you were intending since it could be interpreted either way. Bottomline I'm only giving my takeaway. If uttered works for you and it gives the masterstroke to your art, stick with it. Sometimes even if the world says don't, you must do what in your heart is right.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A clever and faithful acrostic with a worthwhile message and renewing sentiments, I wish you luck with the contest, your poem is powerful and honest, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2018
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A clever and faithful acrostic with a worthwhile message and renewing sentiments, I wish you luck with the contest, your poem is powerful and honest, love Dolly x
Comment Written 22-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2018
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Thank you for the read and the lovely comments. By the way, in the Fanstorian contest my entry was "Befuddled Mother Goose". If you didn't read it, it was you my friend I wrote about. Bucketlist guessed it immediately. Now, that the contest is over I can reveal this.
Hugs,your fan,
Brigitte
