Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca

Excellent

Oh I love it, so passionate with love. I love the last line because death did split you forever but the love and kisses still go on. Great contest entry

 Comment Written 22-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 23-Jan-2018

Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a lovely week.

Comment from Joan E.

Excellent

I am glad to see you are using poetry for its therapeutic benefit as you deal with your loss. I liked your 5-7-7 format and alliteration of "s's". Best wishes in the contest- Joan

 Comment Written 22-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 23-Jan-2018

Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a lovely week.

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

It only feels like forever. After this life is over, it will feel like a blink of the eye in the real Forever in Heaven and then you will be with your beloved in full health of soul and spirit. Hugs.

 Comment Written 22-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 23-Jan-2018

Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a lovely week.

Comment from l.raven

Excellent

HI Ine, OMG girl...truly so very sad my sweet friend...but so very well thought of...right from your poem to your picture...this will have to be the winner...very well written you...Good Luck...love you...Linda xxoo

 Comment Written 22-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 23-Jan-2018

Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a lovely week.

reply by l.raven on 23-Jan-2018

you have one as well sweet girl...and your sooooo welcome...love xxoo

Comment from Dean Kuch

Excellent

Often times those we have lost to the cold cruel confines of death and the grave will come to visit us by way of our dreams. Some of these dreams are very lucid.
A lucid dream is a dream during which the dreamer is aware that they are dreaming. During lucid dreaming, the dreamer may be able to exert some degree of control over the dream characters, narrative, and environment. Hence, if in a dream you find yourself in bed, you can call out to your dearly beloved lost love and they will come to you.
These were my thoughts as I read this.
Your presentation is outstanding.
You do dark well, Ine.
~Dean

 Comment Written 22-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 23-Jan-2018

Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a lovely week. Thanks so much for your complement.

reply by Dean Kuch on 23-Jan-2018

My pleasure. :)

Comment from James H. Oldfield

Excellent

A nice choice of artwork, and very appropriate to the poem.

I liked this a lot, very good. Despite its brevity, it carries a lot of weight, and a significant story.

Very well done, and best of luck in the contest.

Take care.

-James

 Comment Written 22-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 23-Jan-2018

Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a lovely week.

Comment from jppoet

Excellent

the text is tender within its brief space of words but i am sorry, the photo detracts from its sentiment. i suggest you change it, otherwise, it is
poetic, albeit sadly. love, john

 Comment Written 22-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 23-Jan-2018

Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a lovely week.

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

This is a raw write and very sad, but the artwork makes me think there could be some humour behind these words Robina, best of luck with the contest, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 22-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 23-Jan-2018

Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a lovely week.

Comment from Ricky1024

Excellent

This is a "Three Line Contest Entree rich in Theme and imagery.
I particularly like the first few words they Blended very well and the objective and subjective contents were on the fire just keep two measures lined up perfectly good luck in the contest dr. Ricky 1024

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 Comment Written 22-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 23-Jan-2018

Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a lovely week.

Comment from sunnilicious

Exceptional

That is a sick poem. It's really twisted and somehow, I enjoyed it. You very creative. Well thought out and clearly written. Great presentation. This is a winner to me. Be proud. Heart & hugs ONLY your friend, Alicia (aka Sunnilicious)

 Comment Written 22-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 23-Jan-2018

Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a lovely week. Thanks so much for the lovely six.