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I and my husband, Robert

Viewing comments for Chapter 7 "I send you many kisses."
A prayer, then the walk through our marriage.

31 total reviews 
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
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A very well-written three line poem. We end up in bed together after many kisses and we stay together until death part us in this life and we meet again on the other side.

 Comment Written 25-Jan-2018


reply by the author on 26-Jan-2018
    Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a nice weekend.
Comment from Rasmine
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Robina, :)
Hello. I like this. I wish you luck in the competition. Keep on writing! It's so therapeutic. I wrote a lot about when I was abused in my earlier life -- it helped a lot to flush out the pain.
:)
Love,
Nome

 Comment Written 24-Jan-2018


reply by the author on 24-Jan-2018
    Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a great second part of the week. I think it does.
Comment from judiverse
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This is sad. The loneliness comes through. The thought of sending kisses sound like a comforting thought. Although you say forever, the connection is still there. Memories are around to bring the departed loved one close. Your syllable count is right on, and best of luck in the contest. judi

 Comment Written 23-Jan-2018


reply by the author on 24-Jan-2018
    Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a great second part of the week.
Comment from Ulla
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Hi Ine, it's not an easy time you're going trough at the moment, but I think you expressed it very well in this short poem.Very well done. All the best. Ulla:)))

 Comment Written 23-Jan-2018


reply by the author on 24-Jan-2018
    Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a great second part of the week.
Comment from Sharon Haiste
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I think this is an interestin entry for the 3 Line Poetry writing prompt.
Well written and well said. The picture is a good match.
Good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon

 Comment Written 23-Jan-2018


reply by the author on 24-Jan-2018
    Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a great second part of the week.
Comment from Dutchie
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I like this poem . The photo is scary and the poem so beautiful.
Life is a matter of time, but your love for Robert is forever.
He'will Always be in your heart and in your mind. You expressed it very well. Fia

 Comment Written 23-Jan-2018


reply by the author on 23-Jan-2018
    Thanks for your review, Ine. Have a nice week. And yes, I love him forever. I posted the rhyming one too: GHOSTS.
Comment from c_lucas
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I know Love can cross the veil, but I am not sure kisses can. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very interesting read. There is good imagery.

 Comment Written 23-Jan-2018


reply by the author on 23-Jan-2018
    Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a lovely week.
Comment from misscookie
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The photo you used with your poem kind a shook me up.
Than I read you deep emotional poem Those three line said enough.
Thank you for sharing.
Cookie

 Comment Written 23-Jan-2018


reply by the author on 23-Jan-2018
    Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a lovely week.
reply by misscookie on 23-Jan-2018
    You're very welcome and a I wish you the same have a nice week.
    Cookie
Comment from kiwigirl2821
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Hi Ine. This is so sad and yet so beautiful too. It's sweet and the imagery is delightful. I love how you tell of your love in so few words, but the feelings are all there. xoxo Kiwi

 Comment Written 22-Jan-2018


reply by the author on 23-Jan-2018
    Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a lovely week.
Comment from Gert sherwood
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Hello Robina
I hope Dean Kuch reads your Horror and Thriller 5-7-5 poem
I like it how well your pix and words connect so well
Gert

 Comment Written 22-Jan-2018


reply by the author on 23-Jan-2018
    Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a lovely week.
reply by Gert sherwood on 23-Jan-2018
    You are welcome Robina
    Gert