Comment from Eternal Muse

Excellent

You've packed volumes in these beautiful three lines. Excellent artistic presentation and picture. It is sad, as one of the partners is no longer on this earth. The words are very touching.

 Comment Written 26-Mar-2018

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reply by the author on 26-Mar-2018

Thanks for your kind review, Ine, Have a lovely week.

Comment from antonieta

Excellent

It´s scarring, thanks for sharing Three lines showing the death´s anguish. Well done and good luck in the contest.

Antonieta

 Comment Written 26-Mar-2018

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reply by the author on 26-Mar-2018

Thanks for your kind review, Ine, Have a lovely week.

Comment from meeshu

Excellent

Beautiful. I'm saddened at your illness and I wish you better health for a long time. my wife is chronically ill so I am going take this short poem to her for comfort. I thank you for that. there can be no higher praise for a work than that....meeshu

 Comment Written 26-Mar-2018

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reply by the author on 26-Mar-2018

Thanks for your kind review, Ine, Have a lovely week.

Comment from jenintorre

Excellent

This is a very sad and poignant three line poem. Very well chosen words and illustration. I wish you lots of luck in the competition. Best wishes Jen.

 Comment Written 25-Mar-2018

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reply by the author on 25-Mar-2018

Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a lovely week.

Comment from karenina

Excellent

Ewwwwww...ghost l I 've

Or, alternatively

Awwwwwww


Never ending love


Or




A giggle on being married, like, for 35 years!


Any way I interpret it the poem is clever and the image creepy!


Karenina

 Comment Written 25-Mar-2018

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reply by the author on 25-Mar-2018

Thanks for kind review, ine. Have lovely and blessed Sunday, Ine

reply by karenina on 25-Mar-2018

The same to you...
Karenina

Comment from Boogienights

Excellent

Oddly this is both romantic and horrifying at the same time. The image itself gives pause, makes you wonder...what the hell? Nevertheless an interesting 3 line poem entry, good luck to you in the contest.

 Comment Written 24-Mar-2018

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reply by the author on 24-Mar-2018

Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a lovely and blessed Sunday.

Comment from Henry King

Excellent

Macabre, but demonstrates sweet romantic love in Fine Art and fine words.

It made me think of my real experience. Instead of a bony skull, my spouse had a visage reminiscent of Munch's Scream as I held her in my arms and her heart stopped beating.

Well done.

 Comment Written 23-Mar-2018

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reply by the author on 24-Mar-2018

Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a lovely and blessed Sunday.

reply by Henry King on 24-Mar-2018

You are welcome

Comment from Cybertron1986

Excellent

Chilling in both presentation and content. The picture brings about the frightful vision of a lover consumed by separation anxiety. The ending was the perfect twist that really drew me to your piece. Beautiful

 Comment Written 23-Mar-2018

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reply by the author on 24-Mar-2018

Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a lovely and blessed Sunday.

Comment from Liberty Justice

Excellent

WHOA, what a scary but realistic photo that dramatizes your departure from your loved one. You certainly made a huge statement, and you made a point of giving your loved ones kisses forever and ever. WELL DONE. liberty justice

 Comment Written 23-Mar-2018

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reply by the author on 23-Mar-2018

Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a lovely and blessed weekend.

Comment from tfawcus

Excellent

A macabre image together with a poem that is open to interpretation. Perhaps just about the death of a lover, perhaps a death wish. Interesting ambiguity. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 23-Mar-2018

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reply by the author on 23-Mar-2018

Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a lovely and blessed weekend.