Bob Is A Playful Pup
Acrostic poem about a man's best friend.4 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This acrostic poem, Bob Is a Playful Pup, set up with the phrase, BOB HELPS, follows the vertical theme and illustrates the dogs skills as a lure and entertainer for the ladies. One hopes Tim is as valuable.
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2018
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This acrostic poem, Bob Is a Playful Pup, set up with the phrase, BOB HELPS, follows the vertical theme and illustrates the dogs skills as a lure and entertainer for the ladies. One hopes Tim is as valuable.
Comment Written 24-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2018
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Thanks for the terrific review, Bill.
Comment from LateBloomer
Hello author, very good, very cute. Your acrostic flows smoothly from line to line which can be difficult when writing in this style.
I especially liked:
He gets away with what I can't.
Every time he pulls the strings,
Lots of laughs that antic brings.
(I'm sure there are lots of laughs, and his master gets a nice peak too - lol.)
This poem made me smile. As this is a contest entry, I wish you good luck. LateBloomer
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2018
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Hello author, very good, very cute. Your acrostic flows smoothly from line to line which can be difficult when writing in this style.
I especially liked:
He gets away with what I can't.
Every time he pulls the strings,
Lots of laughs that antic brings.
(I'm sure there are lots of laughs, and his master gets a nice peak too - lol.)
This poem made me smile. As this is a contest entry, I wish you good luck. LateBloomer
Comment Written 23-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2018
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Thank you for the smiles and wishes, Late. I appreciate the compliments. (Bob and I both enjoy the trick, but he prefers the blonds, and I let him have his way.)
Comment from lyenochka
Lol. Well, I heard that pigs are even smarter. My sister-in-law's pigs could open the fridge door so she had to put locks on it. That trick would be harder to do for a pig.
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2018
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Lol. Well, I heard that pigs are even smarter. My sister-in-law's pigs could open the fridge door so she had to put locks on it. That trick would be harder to do for a pig.
Comment Written 23-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2018
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Thanks for your pig vs. dog comments, Lyenochka. (I'd like to meet your sister-in-law's pig.) Food for thought: Do you really think it is harder for a pig than a dog to open the fridge? :o)
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No the trick of pulling a string would be harder for a pig than for a pup. The door opening would be harder for a dog than for a pig, I think. Alas, Harley, has gone to meet his Maker long ago.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This acrostic poem speaks about Bob a playful funny pup; well said, well done; thank you for sharing with us; good luck with the contest. Keep writing. DR ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2018
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This acrostic poem speaks about Bob a playful funny pup; well said, well done; thank you for sharing with us; good luck with the contest. Keep writing. DR ALCREATOR
Comment Written 23-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2018
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Thank you for complimenting my poem, Dr. Alcreator,.
