Salty tears
Contest entry2 total reviews
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A meloncholy write and sometimes we cry oceans at times in our life when sorrow fills us with emotion, I wish you luck with the senryu contest, few words that say so much, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2018
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A meloncholy write and sometimes we cry oceans at times in our life when sorrow fills us with emotion, I wish you luck with the senryu contest, few words that say so much, love Dolly x
Comment Written 21-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2018
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Dolly my friend, I thank you for reading and the wonderful comments, happy Sunday.
Comment from Kathy Allmon
I liked how you were able to say so much in three lines. Where did you get your inspiration from? How long have you been writing? Cant wait to read more of your writing.
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2018
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I liked how you were able to say so much in three lines. Where did you get your inspiration from? How long have you been writing? Cant wait to read more of your writing.
Comment Written 21-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2018
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Hello Kathy, I am pleased that you like the poem; please advise how I can improve the poem as you gave it a four star rating; thank you.
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I read your poem several times and I like it more each time. I had done a lot of reviews. I was wrong. Should have given it a 5. Im sorry for that.
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thank you