Timeless
A Senryu3 total reviews
Comment from Susan Burger
This is a good entry in the Senryu contest. I like the feelings it evoked of memories brought back from a good book. Good work! Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2018
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This is a good entry in the Senryu contest. I like the feelings it evoked of memories brought back from a good book. Good work! Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 21-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2018
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Thank you for taking the time to read and review!
Comment from mermaids
Your senryu form brings forth many childhood memories of toys and other belongings. "Hearts never forget" is a fitting last line, we have pleasant memories of our stuff from childhood.
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2018
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Your senryu form brings forth many childhood memories of toys and other belongings. "Hearts never forget" is a fitting last line, we have pleasant memories of our stuff from childhood.
Comment Written 20-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2018
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Thank you for your insights.
Comment from Gloria ....
Very nice imagery and thoughts evoked by this delightful poem. Attics were a great place for memorabilia at one point in history and now it's quite difficult to find them. So good for the count on two points.
Thank you for sharing and best wishes to you in the contest.
Gloria
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2018
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Very nice imagery and thoughts evoked by this delightful poem. Attics were a great place for memorabilia at one point in history and now it's quite difficult to find them. So good for the count on two points.
Thank you for sharing and best wishes to you in the contest.
Gloria
Comment Written 20-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2018
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Appreciate your taking the time to read and review.