Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This parody of the tune to I'm a Little Teapot, I'd Rather Be Puffing, sounds right, but I'm sorry the draw of mall, with its multitude of opportunities to interact with the walking dead of mankind isn't enough to keep you off the broccoli.

 Comment Written 24-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 24-Jan-2018

Thanks for the read and the comments. More like the male sitting dead along the mall.

Comment from Chrissy710

Excellent

Ha Ha Harry is this your reward for carrying all the shopping home LOL . You could just take the bong with you and puff away while your wife makes the selections Ha Ha A fun poem for this contest Cheers Christine

 Comment Written 21-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 21-Jan-2018

Thanks so much for the read, I'm pleased the little piece brought a smile.

Comment from robyn corum

Excellent

Harry,

The short and sweet answer is YES! You are supposed to follow at the wife's heels patiently and happily, carrying all our purchases and saying, 'yes, dear' and 'mhm hm, punkin' and 'oh, that one looks super on you, sweetie,' until you fall down. (But then you just get a Gatorade --the drink of Champions and a power bar -- and get up and continue.)

What's the deal with this ATTITUDE, dear? Need a va-cay?

Welllll...you're not getting one. So shut up and pick up my bags and COME ON!

 Comment Written 20-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 21-Jan-2018

Oh, yes. The magic words in any marriage for the guy are certainly, yes, dear. The big secret to happiness and a successful marriage. It is too bad some guys never learn the secret. Thanks for the read and the comments.

Comment from Gulbahar Sidhu

Excellent

Hi there,
I am a new poet reading your song,
dragged to your poem with an effortless pong!

I tried to write a poetic review! Nice poem anyway, I enjoyed reading it.
Many congratulations.

 Comment Written 19-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 19-Jan-2018

Thanks for the read and keep up with your poetry efforts.

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

You made me laugh Harry with this write. I think many husbands feel like this because they hate shopping and end up carrying the bags! A great (adult) 'little teapot' write! Love Dolly x

 Comment Written 19-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 19-Jan-2018

Thanks for the review and the encouraging words. And be kind to the mall men.

Comment from Sharon Haiste

Excellent

I think this is a good entry for the I'm a Liitle Teapot writing prompt.
Well said, well written. This is a fun poem.
Well done and good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon

 Comment Written 19-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 19-Jan-2018

Thanks for the read and the review.

Comment from Wetbelly01

Excellent

HaHaHa!!... I Like it!!...
I would think it will do well in the upcoming contest...
It has a fine rhythm and rhyme... I don't see any bad issues...
My compliments... Well Done, as far as I'm concerned!...
Good Luck in the contest!!

 Comment Written 19-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 19-Jan-2018

Thanks for the read and the kind review. Happy it made you smile.

Comment from Mrs. KT

Excellent

Hello!

Hah! I loved it! The next time I am at the mall, and I spy a man "of a certain age," I am certain to think of your poem.

Smile for the day! I definitely will never think of "I a Little Teapot" in the same vein ever again!

Best Wishes,
diane

 Comment Written 19-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 19-Jan-2018

Thanks for the review and the kind words. Have pity on the mall men.