Misnomer
Naani poem5 total reviews
Comment from Joan E.
What a clever juxtaposition of images in the picture! Your naani makes a very good point with its question. I admired your intensifying the message with the addition of alliteration. Well done and best wishes in the contest- Joan
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What a clever juxtaposition of images in the picture! Your naani makes a very good point with its question. I admired your intensifying the message with the addition of alliteration. Well done and best wishes in the contest- Joan
Comment Written 19-Jan-2018
Comment from rama devi
Excellent entry. Potent theme-=-highly relevant. The misnomer line is a great AHA Superb alliteration of S and M too. Impacting write. Good naani form and presentation. Good luck in the contest. It will be be a contender for my vote.
Warmly, rd
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Excellent entry. Potent theme-=-highly relevant. The misnomer line is a great AHA Superb alliteration of S and M too. Impacting write. Good naani form and presentation. Good luck in the contest. It will be be a contender for my vote.
Warmly, rd
Comment Written 19-Jan-2018
Comment from johnwilson
"quid pro quo"...I had to take a peek at your work. This is a rare find. To be able to write something so profound, so far-reaching with 20-205 syllables is amazing! This is definitely worthy of that sixth star of which I have no more. In my opinion, No we are not worthy of the moniker of "wise men".
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"quid pro quo"...I had to take a peek at your work. This is a rare find. To be able to write something so profound, so far-reaching with 20-205 syllables is amazing! This is definitely worthy of that sixth star of which I have no more. In my opinion, No we are not worthy of the moniker of "wise men".
Comment Written 19-Jan-2018
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This is a grand challenging Naani poem, when purity and integrity of air and sea is damaged, it is not unwise to call Homo Sapiens a misnomer; well said, well done. Good luck with the contest. DR ALCREATOR
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This is a grand challenging Naani poem, when purity and integrity of air and sea is damaged, it is not unwise to call Homo Sapiens a misnomer; well said, well done. Good luck with the contest. DR ALCREATOR
Comment Written 18-Jan-2018
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think this is a good entry for the 'Naami Poem' writing prompt.
Well done. This is nicely written with a good message.
Good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon
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I think this is a good entry for the 'Naami Poem' writing prompt.
Well done. This is nicely written with a good message.
Good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon
Comment Written 18-Jan-2018