Comment from moonsunrise

Excellent

The imagery you selected for this poem speaks volumes to me. It is so true how one can be in a crowded room or world and yet feel so empty and alone. One who keeps searching for happiness. While reading "estranged from my shadow" I felt the disconnect between a man and his inner being wondering why he is so lonely.
Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 19-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 19-Jan-2018

Hello moonsunrise, I appreciate your visit and the wonderful insights, thank you very much.

reply by moonsunrise on 20-Jan-2018

Your very welcome.

Comment from Val Crisson

Excellent

This is a wonderful naani, which really incorporates human emotion and life. That is the essence of naani. So few of these entries, show that in any form, your's does. If we have people who really understand naani on this site, it should do very well in the contest. Good luck

 Comment Written 18-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 18-Jan-2018

Hello Val, my friend, I agree with you and am not sure whether there are any on the site who can judge different forms of poetry; it's unfortunate. I thank you for your visit and the wonderful review, take care.

reply by Val Crisson on 18-Jan-2018

Thank you

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

Many ponder this and your words are meloncholy and true, as you say there are so many people, none of us should be lonely, I wish you luck with the contest, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 18-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 18-Jan-2018

Hi Dolly, I appreciate your time and the kind review; thank you very much.