Comment from kiwigirl2821

Excellent

Hello Val. Love your Naani! I love the sad love poems the best. I think it's hard to convey the emotive aspects of lovers walking away! You have done so beautifully ... wishing you nothing but success in your contest. xx deborah

 Comment Written 15-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 20-Feb-2018

Thank you

Comment from flylikeaneagle

Excellent

Great message of love shattered. The vision was imprinted
in your mind as you felt hurt. I like the alliteration of s words.
Nice photo for the naani. flylikeaneagle

 Comment Written 18-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 18-Jan-2018

Thank you very much for this lovely review.

Comment from misscookie

Excellent

I have no more stars to give. The artwork you choose to go with your poem is a perfect match
I could truly relate to your every word I remember when my love
departed from my life.
Thank you for sharing.
Cookie

 Comment Written 18-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 18-Jan-2018

Thank you, misscookie, I would love that star. but the review means more to me. Hugs He wasn't worth it. LOL

Comment from Badger_29

Excellent

We enjoyed reading this as I was considering joining the contest and wanted to see a good example. This is a really good example of the use of wording theme a tied together well. I love the comparison of the thick clouds to the opaque mist surrounding your heart very descriptive good use of words.

Blessings,

Brother Badger

 Comment Written 18-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 18-Jan-2018

Thank you "we" It is a good example of a naani, but truly there are so few anymore that really understand this form on this site. I'm sure something about a dog will win, none less, please join the contest.

reply by Badger_29 on 18-Jan-2018

Thanks for the kind and practical reply Darren

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

Well done naani poem! It starts with a physical scene of the sun setting and then we are drawn into the emotional world of the poem's persona who expresses the setting of a relationship, the shattering of light of the sunset is reflecting in the shattering of the heart.

 Comment Written 18-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 18-Jan-2018

Thank you for this wonderful and intelligent review.

Comment from Mrs. KT

Excellent

Hello!
Just a beautiful Nanni, and I wish that I had six stars to give to you! Your offering is filled with emotion and definitely fulfills that requirements of a Nanni. Very well crafted. Best wishes in the contest!

diane

 Comment Written 18-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 18-Jan-2018

I wish you did too. LOL I love this review, as many don't understand naani is about human emotions and circumstances, but you definitely seem to GET THIS. Thank you very much for an intelligent review.

reply by Mrs. KT on 18-Jan-2018

Hello!
You are most welcome!
However, I just reread my review, and it doesn't sound very intelligent: "the requirements" not "that requirements!"
Goodness!

diane

reply by the author on 18-Jan-2018

Yes, but you got the essence of a naani. Which is far more important than spelling

Comment from Sharon Haiste

Excellent

I think this is a good entry for the Naani Poem writing prompt.
Well said, a clear message, and the picture is a beautiful match.
Well done and good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon

 Comment Written 18-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 18-Jan-2018

Thank you for your review.

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

These are sad words and I suppose suns settings means the end of the day and the end of a relationship. Your words are meloncholy and I wish you luck with the contest, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 18-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 18-Jan-2018

Thank you.