Comment from flylikeaneagle

Excellent

Very pretty photo with your message of singing and playing music.
Maybe, your second learn could be the word stop. Do you play
an instrument? I like the rhythms of life. Nicely done. flylikeaneagle

 Comment Written 18-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 19-Jan-2018

Thanks for reading and responding to my work. I played flute for many years, but don't play anymore. Maybe I'll get back to it in 2018. I thought about that second line and wanted to use a term that we used-- years back--when we "rested" or "paused" between notes. Thanks for your observations. elaine

Comment from Sharon Haiste

Excellent

I think this is a good entry for the Naani Poem Contest.
Well written, it paints a nice picture.
Well done and good luck to you with the contest.
Sharon

 Comment Written 18-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 19-Jan-2018

Thanks, Sharon, for reading and commenting. I appreciate your response.

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

Yes the rhythms of life can be tuneful and we can also hit some bum notes along the way, but life is always worth living isn't it, I wish you luck with the contest, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 18-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 19-Jan-2018

Thanks, Dolly, for reading and responding to my poem. Your comments were as poetic as my naani!! I appreciate your observations.