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Who's Next

Who will our next president be?

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Comment from D.F. Wood
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Not a bad story. I've seen the rumors of Oprah running as well. It could be interesting to see who all may pop up to run for the presidency now that we've witnessed it possible for a non-politician to win. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 20-Jan-2018


reply by the author on 27-Jan-2018
    Thanks for reading. Sorry I was so slow getting back to you. A lot going on around here lately.
Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)
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There were some good candidates I think before the primaries. We just never heard about the others running besides these two. Trump was elected only because the media spent so much time on him, we never heard about those who were truly qualified. I quit watching TV of any sort 2 years ago, the election coverage was making me sick. I voted, not for anyone, but against someone. Well written. Best wishes in the contest, my friend~Debbie

 Comment Written 20-Jan-2018


reply by the author on 27-Jan-2018
    Thanks for reading and commenting. There were some excellent candidates at the start of the primaries.
Comment from Frank De layna
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By what you wrote you did the right thing in not voting. Trump won because people with no understanding of government or politician' s history voted for the star of the apprentice.

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 Comment Written 20-Jan-2018


reply by the author on 27-Jan-2018
    Thanks for reading and commenting.
Comment from Ricky1024
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'Who's Next' was well written with great theme and imagery.
It flowed well and read well with no grammar issues as well.
Adjective Content was aligned well with Objective Content and Descriptive Measures aligned perfectly.
Dr Ricky 1024.

 Comment Written 20-Jan-2018


reply by the author on 20-Jan-2018
    Hi, Ricky. Always good to hear from you. Glad you enjoyed my short commentary.
Comment from Zue65
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I respect your opinion and beliefs which were shared effectively in this post. But as a Christian I am inclined to believe that Donald Trump is the modern Cyrus in the Bible. You may not like it, but reading the verses have given me a fresh look at Trump who is always maligned by the elitist and Leftist media who don't believe in God and Jesus. Oprah believes that Jesus is just one of the ways to enter heaven and that is negating Jesus as the only way to life. Thanks for sharing your thoughts in this post. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 20-Jan-2018


reply by the author on 20-Jan-2018
    Thank you for reading and commenting. I find your theory about Donald Trump to be quite interesting. Who knows, maybe you're right.
Comment from Mrs. KT
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Hello!
The quandary you express is one felt by many. It will be interesting to see what our future holds.
As for your writing, it flows well.
Best wishes!
Diane

 Comment Written 19-Jan-2018


reply by the author on 20-Jan-2018
    Thanks for taking the time to read and comment. It is appreciated.
Comment from Brigitte Elko
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You chose to use the prompt in a clever way with your first sentence. This tale is a true one describing the political climate with accuracy. It is a shame that a poor, honest, upstanding citizen can not run for president. Why? One needs to be rich to afford the luxury of being nominated. I voted but it was the lesser of two evils that I chose. Thanks for sharing, hopefully in the next election there will be a candidate worthy of your vote.
Have a great day!
:)Brigitte

 Comment Written 19-Jan-2018


reply by the author on 20-Jan-2018
    Thank you. Yes, I have lost faith in our government and politicians in general. You're right, only the rich can afford to run for president.
Comment from Twinsissy
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Your statements are clear and concise.
I think your writing is first rate;

I realized as I began reading this a second time how difficult it is to remain objective and stick to the craft, not the message in this case.

Your considerations and suggested alternative wrap the article up well
BUT
You MUST get out and vote - I believe each vote can make a difference!!

 Comment Written 19-Jan-2018


reply by the author on 20-Jan-2018
    Thank you for reading and your kind comments.
Comment from estory
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I sympathize with your apathy, and I think you are 100% right. But the problem is people. people are corrupt, and my guess is, their corruption will continue no matter who is in office. Right now, our government is controlled by the rich and powerful, the big international corporations. But when was that not true? Here we are 5,000 years later with the same problems we had then. Selfish people muscling each other out of the way to get more for themselves. People blaming others for their own problems and shortcomings. Everybody looking around and saying I'm worth more than the next guy. we've tried capitalism, socialism, communism, fascism, monarchies. Nothing works. My hope now is in Jesus coming back and sorting it all out. Then a lot of people are going to be in for a big surprise because in heaven, its the people who serve others who are held in high regard, and everything operates on faith, not money. estory

 Comment Written 19-Jan-2018


reply by the author on 20-Jan-2018
    Thank you for reading and commenting. It's for sure someone needs to sort things out someday.
Comment from Sugarray77
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A well-written and good expository rant. I liked it, although, I didn't agree with all of it. Great to air your opinion and hopefully, win a contest too. Great job!

 Comment Written 19-Jan-2018


reply by the author on 20-Jan-2018
    Thank you for reading and commenting. You're right, it's just my rant and no one need agree with it.