FAMILY TIES.
Viewing comments for Chapter 89 "Give. It will be given back to you. ""ALL IN THE FAMILY."
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Comment from James H. Oldfield
Lovely story, and a gorgeous dog, in the image (which, I have to admit, drew me in in the first place :) ).
I can't say I spotted anything that needs changing, the tale read very well, with, of course, a very nice ending.
Very well done.
-James
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Lovely story, and a gorgeous dog, in the image (which, I have to admit, drew me in in the first place :) ).
I can't say I spotted anything that needs changing, the tale read very well, with, of course, a very nice ending.
Very well done.
-James
Comment Written 18-Jan-2018
Comment from Dumbledor
Enjoyed reading this story. Almost resembles a fable or fairytale in its style. The narration is childlike and holds the adult readers sympathy, and a young persons attention, All with a happy ending. Nice to read.
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Enjoyed reading this story. Almost resembles a fable or fairytale in its style. The narration is childlike and holds the adult readers sympathy, and a young persons attention, All with a happy ending. Nice to read.
Comment Written 18-Jan-2018