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Viewing comments for Chapter 15 "The Emotion of Love "Eclectic style
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Comment from Asem.inspirations
Hello, Trisha: I didn't see the other one but This one is just missing the first line and the last line. The first line is just the emotion so your first line would be "LOVE." The last line would be a description of the total emotion or what it does.
Dolly and Dawn both posted in the author notes the layout lesson of this kind of poem. I did see this but I decided to do my own thing for the first try but I promised Dolly that I would return with the real Emotion Poem. I'll get around to it but I have seventy posts to read. Talk with you later.
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2018
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Hello, Trisha: I didn't see the other one but This one is just missing the first line and the last line. The first line is just the emotion so your first line would be "LOVE." The last line would be a description of the total emotion or what it does.
Dolly and Dawn both posted in the author notes the layout lesson of this kind of poem. I did see this but I decided to do my own thing for the first try but I promised Dolly that I would return with the real Emotion Poem. I'll get around to it but I have seventy posts to read. Talk with you later.
Comment Written 17-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2018
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Go Tier go! I will go back and change what?s needed.Thanks for helping me.
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Teri7
This looks like a really well written emotion poem. It looks like you have include all the five senses. You used very good descriptive wording and great imagery with the art work. Blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2018
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This looks like a really well written emotion poem. It looks like you have include all the five senses. You used very good descriptive wording and great imagery with the art work. Blessings, Teri
Comment Written 16-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2018
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Blessings back, Teri. I get muddled because I write an entry for a club, then Post other like poems just in general, not for contest or club,. There are so many contests that people wish me luck when I?m NOT entering, LOL. Thanks for your complimentary comments.
Hugs Trisha
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think this is a good version of an Emotion Poem.
It covers all the basis and runs smoothly.
Well done and thank you for sharing your lovely poem and picture with us.
Sharon
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2018
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I think this is a good version of an Emotion Poem.
It covers all the basis and runs smoothly.
Well done and thank you for sharing your lovely poem and picture with us.
Sharon
Comment Written 16-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2018
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You are always welcome. Have you posted lately? Thanks for your appreciation review,
Hugs,Trisha