Comment from Dumbledor

Excellent

A very encouraging 5 line poem, hits the spot just when needed. ''but life leads to the future-where victory awaits'' A very encouraging verse, and good wishes for the contest.

 Comment Written 06-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 06-Feb-2018

Thank you, D, for the encouraging review.

Comment from Sherman541

Excellent

Love the future picture of dream like state. I totally agree, here and now on earth, we may not win, but the future is always open to great possibilities and a victory does await, even in the great beyond. Sherman541

 Comment Written 06-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 06-Feb-2018

Thanks, Sherman

reply by Sherman541 on 06-Feb-2018

you are welcome :)

Comment from Sugarray77

Excellent

A very rousing banner and cry for future victory. A clever and good 5 line poem. You developed it well and it flowed nicely. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 06-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 06-Feb-2018

Thanks Sugarray

Comment from closetpoetjester

Excellent

Indeed victory awaits and if it's not ours, it will be the next generations or their childrens children.
I love your optimism. Well written
I'm a glass half full kinda gal meself!

Cheers P

 Comment Written 29-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 29-Jan-2018

Thanks, P.

Comment from Sharon Haiste

Excellent

I think this is a good entry for the '5 Line Poem' writing prompt.
Well said with your few, well chosen words.
Well done and good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon

 Comment Written 27-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 27-Jan-2018

Thanks, Sharon.

Comment from Violet WolfChild

Excellent

Powerful. So much said with so few words. It's beautiful. Excellent job.

We'll never know what the future holds if we choose to surrender now..."Live on. Survive."

 Comment Written 27-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 27-Jan-2018

Thank you, Violet, for the kind review. Bill

Comment from Stephanie Alexandra Howard

Exceptional

Hi there I really like this because in life you can't win all the time but victory lies in survival. well done Bill I enjoyed this.
Wishing you all the best with your writing.
Stephanie Howard.

 Comment Written 27-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 27-Jan-2018

Thank you, Stephanie, for the terrific review. Bill

Comment from jppoet

Excellent

Congratulations, this is glorious poem sculpted so artfully within the confines of just 5 lines. The photo lends artistic affinity to your poem.
I find it somewhat in sympathy with my poem "VALENTINE'S DAY" now entered in the VALENTINE POETRY contest ending Feb 14. With an award of ALL TIME BEST, friends say its TRIPLICATE acrostical display has never been seen on FS. Pls take a peek, let me know what you think. Lastly, I have become your Fan. Blessings.

 Comment Written 27-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 27-Jan-2018

Wow, jp, this quite an uplifting review. Thank you. Bill

Comment from Dean Kuch

Excellent

Oh grave, where is thy victory? Oh death, where is they sting?
This "battle" we're all waging now--this battle between the forces of evil and the armies of light--will only take place in the earthly realm. One day it will all end.
Let the people rejoice.
~Dean

 Comment Written 27-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 27-Jan-2018

Thanks for getting into the spirit, Dean.

reply by Dean Kuch on 27-Jan-2018

Anytime...

Comment from Teri7

Excellent

Bill, This is a very well written five line poem you have penned for the contest. You used very good descriptive words and very good imagery with the art work! Best wishes in the contest. Teri

 Comment Written 17-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 17-Jan-2018

Thanks, Teri

reply by Teri7 on 17-Jan-2018

You are so welcome Bill!

reply by Teri7 on 17-Jan-2018

You are so welcome Bill!