Comment from nomi338

Excellent

I must confess, this lively poem was not a mess.
Great action sequences did it display
I was able to follow things all the way
Best part of the whole thing was
There was not one single commercial pitch
However, the mention of all those Germy things
Gave me quite an annoying itch.

 Comment Written 15-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 15-Jan-2018

Arch Amoeba ain?t no dope
He plays up to the microscope
When expansion cells divide
His story will go nationwide

Comment from Chrissy710

Excellent

Hi Bill I am glad you are here because your poems always make me laugh, because you are so clever and witty in the way you create a poem and this is terrific . STD yes not a good look LOL Glad I came across this . Cheers Christine

 Comment Written 15-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 15-Jan-2018

Thanks again, Christine , for giving this a look. Bill

Comment from Gloria ....

Excellent

Love the inner-city dialect, Bill. It's perfect for the gridiron Protozoan Bowl. Some excellent puns and your originality is the envy of the joint.

Great job with fun read in excellent metre and rhyme. This Petri Dish has an active culture.

Gloria

 Comment Written 14-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 14-Jan-2018

Thank you, Gloria, for the kind review. Bill

Comment from Teri7

Excellent

This is just a cute poem you have penned about Archibald Amoeba and his football plays. You used very cute and good wording with great imagery from the art work. Good job! Blessings, Teri

 Comment Written 14-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 14-Jan-2018

Thanks, Teri

Comment from Ricky1024

Excellent

This was well written Bill, rich in Theme and imagery.
It flowed well and read well with no grammar issues.
Adjective Content was aligned well with Objective Content and Descriptive Measures aligned perfectly.
Dr Ricky 1024.Later today

 Comment Written 14-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 14-Jan-2018

Thanks, Ricky

Comment from Phyllis Stewart

Excellent

Archibald Amoeba
was the wide receivah
the running bac-te-ri-a
was Jamokka Germ

It was the Protozoan Bowl...

LOL! I love this! Running bacteria is brilliant. And Protozoan Bowl... You are so clever.

 Comment Written 14-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 14-Jan-2018

Thanks, Phyllis. You are too kind. Bill

Comment from BeasPeas

Excellent

You are too clever. I enjoyed following the "game" and I'm not even a sports fan. I also like the form you've used here: 3 lines rhyming and the last line of each stanza rhyming with the other last lines. Great job. Marilyn

 Comment Written 14-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 14-Jan-2018

Thank you, Marilyn, for the great review. Bill

Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear

Excellent

What a poor state? By degrees the state and status changed or diminished or losing glory; poor amoeba; well said, well done; enjoyed the read. Keep writing. DR ALCREATOR

 Comment Written 14-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 14-Jan-2018

Thanks, ALD

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

This one is both humorous but over my head. I don't get the football references. But I can imagine. I liked the pun in "with athletes quite microbial
sports agents who would 'cell' your soul". Strange but creative metaphors.

 Comment Written 14-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 14-Jan-2018

I was watching football at the time. Tanks for responding.

Comment from Sharon Haiste

Excellent

This poem is pun city.
Well done, this is a lot of fun.
Your artwork is a good match as well.
Well done and thank you for sharing another funny one with us.
Sharon

 Comment Written 14-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 14-Jan-2018

Thanks, Sharon