The life of a cable news junkie.
Where confusion and deception reigns20 total reviews
Comment from Joan E.
How did I miss this winning post? I enjoyed your interpretation of the prompt and could not agree with your conclusion more! I admired your rhymes plus "clay" and "formaldehyde" metaphors. Big cheers- Joan
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2018
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How did I miss this winning post? I enjoyed your interpretation of the prompt and could not agree with your conclusion more! I admired your rhymes plus "clay" and "formaldehyde" metaphors. Big cheers- Joan
Comment Written 20-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2018
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Thanks for the great review. Late again as always. My new normal. Lol.
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I'm joining your club again, since I just returned from a short trip to San Francisco. Have a satisfying end of the week- Joan
Comment from estory
This is witty, and you pull it off with a nice bit of humor, I liked the ending. I think the format creates this great counterpoint staccato that emulates the two competing voices of the news organizations, and you get a great sense of the listener caught between them, frustrated, pulled into directions. the meter is quick and upbeat, and the rhyme scheme helped with the counter point, nice job estory
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2018
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This is witty, and you pull it off with a nice bit of humor, I liked the ending. I think the format creates this great counterpoint staccato that emulates the two competing voices of the news organizations, and you get a great sense of the listener caught between them, frustrated, pulled into directions. the meter is quick and upbeat, and the rhyme scheme helped with the counter point, nice job estory
Comment Written 16-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2018
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Thanks for the thorough review.
Comment from MelB
Hi Dallas01, congratulations on the contest win! I stopped watching the news a long time ago. They are all nuts and bent on spreading lies and hatred - the very thing they accuse others of doing.
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2018
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Hi Dallas01, congratulations on the contest win! I stopped watching the news a long time ago. They are all nuts and bent on spreading lies and hatred - the very thing they accuse others of doing.
Comment Written 15-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2018
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Exactly...thanks for the congrats. I am weaning myself off inorder to save my sanity. And improve my mood. Lol
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It definitely helps! I'm much happier without their stupidity in my life.
Comment from Ken the Carpenter
Thank you very much, first laugh I've had today, sorry it wasn't a laugh of joy but more of frustration it seems we are watching one person flush down the drain what has been struggled for so long, I feel he has lit up the gray zone with the bold non-reality of the sh** and from our leadership. Love all there is and try to smile :(
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2018
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Thank you very much, first laugh I've had today, sorry it wasn't a laugh of joy but more of frustration it seems we are watching one person flush down the drain what has been struggled for so long, I feel he has lit up the gray zone with the bold non-reality of the sh** and from our leadership. Love all there is and try to smile :(
Comment Written 15-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2018
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So glad it made you smile. Too bad it is not a piece of fiction.
Comment from BeasPeas
Congratulations on your win in the contest. I'm a news junkie, too. Very good poem about what is truth and what is not. The proof of the pudding is in how they vote. Marilyn
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2018
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Congratulations on your win in the contest. I'm a news junkie, too. Very good poem about what is truth and what is not. The proof of the pudding is in how they vote. Marilyn
Comment Written 15-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2018
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Thanks for the great review. I have noticed that when I take a break, I feel much better.
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Hi Dallas. We have no control over these things, so we have to let them go.
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I'm real familar with that philosophy but for me it takes practice, practice, practice
Comment from reconciled
I had
a
forum in with her...
front ends totaled.
Never play chicken with an op-ed
or suppose anyone's smart enough to swerve. I'm always Michael
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2018
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I had
a
forum in with her...
front ends totaled.
Never play chicken with an op-ed
or suppose anyone's smart enough to swerve. I'm always Michael
Comment Written 14-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2018
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Hey Michael, how have you been? Trying to pry myself away from all of the b/s. Think it was Literally making me depressed. when I leave it alone, I feel much better. Yet Another addiction that needs addressed. Lol.
Thanks for the bonus star..It came in first in the contest.
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Hi D...-smile-....ah I'm hibernating...I do venture to and from the cave periodically to pluck berry's and crap...but I'm pretty much a loner these days...I've retired from trying to understand other humans. I'm real glad you came in first though...it was an honest write. send honey-
Comment from samantha0930
The picture is very random, and doesn't seem to go with the theme of your poem at all, unless I'm not understanding what's going on in the picture. I feel it might be better used for some sort of horror themed writing.
I really like the rhythm and rhymes in the poem, although I got confused at the end when you censored yourself, even though you gave a language warning, and left "bullshit" as it is.
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reply by the author on 14-Jan-2018
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The picture is very random, and doesn't seem to go with the theme of your poem at all, unless I'm not understanding what's going on in the picture. I feel it might be better used for some sort of horror themed writing.
I really like the rhythm and rhymes in the poem, although I got confused at the end when you censored yourself, even though you gave a language warning, and left "bullshit" as it is.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 14-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2018
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Thanks for reviewing.
Comment from mvbrooks
I thoroughly enjoyed this poem. It's witty, it has a strong rhyme scheme, it has a positive flow. I could imagine this being read as part of the weekend news on Saturday Night Live. Imaginative, creative, well written.
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2018
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I thoroughly enjoyed this poem. It's witty, it has a strong rhyme scheme, it has a positive flow. I could imagine this being read as part of the weekend news on Saturday Night Live. Imaginative, creative, well written.
Comment Written 14-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2018
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Thanks for the awesome review and the bonus star.
Comment from Liberty Justice
WOW OMG What an amazingly comical and entertaining poem story. That person looks just like somebody I know and that person is me. I flip back and forth between four news channels trying to catch all the news. Then, I try to watch news four to five times a day. You got my thumbs up and I think I launched you into 1st place. NICELY DONE. Liberty justice
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2018
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WOW OMG What an amazingly comical and entertaining poem story. That person looks just like somebody I know and that person is me. I flip back and forth between four news channels trying to catch all the news. Then, I try to watch news four to five times a day. You got my thumbs up and I think I launched you into 1st place. NICELY DONE. Liberty justice
Comment Written 14-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2018
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Me too but depression over it all is coaxing me to break that habit. lol. Thanks for reviewing.
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I know what you mean. We were both obsessed with the news. Planes keep crashing and skidding off runway. This official said he accidentally pushed the wrong button--the button that said a missile had been fired and was headed to Hawaii right then. Crazy. This happened, yesterday. liberty justice
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Thanks for wishing me good luck in contest, today, and I will do well, if lots of people participate and give support.
I try to support by giving my thumbs up in all contests.
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You're welcome.
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I love it when people support me in competitions, because I always support everybody in competitions every day, so thank you for wishing me good luck in contest today liberty justice
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Liberty justice replied. Hope you stay in 1st.
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Thanks. Need to check.
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I love it when people support me in competitions, because I always support everybody in competitions every day, so thank you for wishing me good luck in contest today.
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Welcome
Comment from Joy Graham
Good picture to complement your message in a poem :) I enjoyed your bouncy meter in each line that kept the momentum to the last line of the poem. Satisfying rhymes. Terrific job fitting CNN and Fox into your poem so smoothly. This is a fun contest entry. I wish you well in the contest.
Joy xx
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2018
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Good picture to complement your message in a poem :) I enjoyed your bouncy meter in each line that kept the momentum to the last line of the poem. Satisfying rhymes. Terrific job fitting CNN and Fox into your poem so smoothly. This is a fun contest entry. I wish you well in the contest.
Joy xx
Comment Written 14-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2018
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thanks for the great review.