The Verdant Glade
Serenity Acrostic10 total reviews
Comment from Mame
Can see why you won. The words echo such peace and harmony. Indeed the verse and picture are so entwined to promote peacefulness.
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2018
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Can see why you won. The words echo such peace and harmony. Indeed the verse and picture are so entwined to promote peacefulness.
Comment Written 26-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2018
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Thank you so much for your comments and good review.
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Thank you so much for your comments and good review.
Comment from Contests
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2018
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 A contest winning entry! A seven star rating from the Contest Committee for posting the winning contest entry. |
Comment Written 20-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2018
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Thank you so much. I appreciate your selection of my poem for the award. I?ve been writing for about a month and find that it soothes my soul. The award is a welcome encouragement.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written acrostic poem. We can find serenity in the woods where everything seems to be peaceful. Nature sounds a pleasant harmonious symphony.
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2018
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A very well-written acrostic poem. We can find serenity in the woods where everything seems to be peaceful. Nature sounds a pleasant harmonious symphony.
Comment Written 15-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2018
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Thank you for the review and comments. They are appreciated.
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Thank you for the review and comments. They are appreciated.
Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux
I like this poem. I like the flow and content. It was well written and very well done. The accompanying artwork was nicely done and spot on. Thank you for sharing this. I look forward to reading more of your work.
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2018
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I like this poem. I like the flow and content. It was well written and very well done. The accompanying artwork was nicely done and spot on. Thank you for sharing this. I look forward to reading more of your work.
Comment Written 13-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2018
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Thanks so much for the good review.
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Thanks so much for the good review.
Comment from judiverse
I love your great word choices in this. Verdant glade, hushing breeze--they add to the atmosphere of the place. Excellent examples of sights and sounds of the place. The beauty and peacefulness come through. This has a nice flow, too. Great word for the acrostic. I like the sound of serenity. judi
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2018
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I love your great word choices in this. Verdant glade, hushing breeze--they add to the atmosphere of the place. Excellent examples of sights and sounds of the place. The beauty and peacefulness come through. This has a nice flow, too. Great word for the acrostic. I like the sound of serenity. judi
Comment Written 13-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2018
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Thanks so much for your review and comments. I really appreciate it. Sugarray
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You're quite welcome. juid
Comment from Dean Kuch
Oh, this is very good, Sugarray77.
Not only do you evoke wonderful images of peacefulness, but you've also managed to write your acrostic poem in perfect rhyme.
If this were not a site sponsored contest where the winner is decided upon by the "Committee", you would certainly have my vote.
Good luck!
~Dean
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2018
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Oh, this is very good, Sugarray77.
Not only do you evoke wonderful images of peacefulness, but you've also managed to write your acrostic poem in perfect rhyme.
If this were not a site sponsored contest where the winner is decided upon by the "Committee", you would certainly have my vote.
Good luck!
~Dean
Comment Written 13-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2018
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Awww thanks so much Dean. I really appreciate the words, reviews and comments!!
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You're very welcome.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I can feel the peace and calm in this write which is full of dreams and pleasant lullaby's, good luck for with the contest, I hardly notices that it was an acrostic, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2018
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I can feel the peace and calm in this write which is full of dreams and pleasant lullaby's, good luck for with the contest, I hardly notices that it was an acrostic, love Dolly x
Comment Written 13-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2018
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Thanks so much Dolly for the comments, review and encouragement!!!
Comment from rhonnie69
Happy New Year SUGARRAY77: I love a thought that I can See.That's the kind of thought your imagery have given to me. I'm a poet too. That's why I can relate to your poem, and you. Your ditty demonstrates the wit you've got. I think your work of art is hot, SUGARRAY, hot. I've picked up pointers, and I have learned a lot. You write me. And I write you. We can learn from each other, and that's what we should do. We're on the same team, so when you win
I win. God bless you, SUGARRAY, until we meet again. rhonnie69.
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2018
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Happy New Year SUGARRAY77: I love a thought that I can See.That's the kind of thought your imagery have given to me. I'm a poet too. That's why I can relate to your poem, and you. Your ditty demonstrates the wit you've got. I think your work of art is hot, SUGARRAY, hot. I've picked up pointers, and I have learned a lot. You write me. And I write you. We can learn from each other, and that's what we should do. We're on the same team, so when you win
I win. God bless you, SUGARRAY, until we meet again. rhonnie69.
Comment Written 13-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2018
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Happy New Year rhonnie. Thanks for your great review. I love the idea of sharing pointers and creative ideas. Thanks again!!
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Happy New Year rhonnie. Thanks for your great review. I love the idea of sharing pointers and creative ideas. Thanks again!!
Comment from rjuselius
This is an outstanding piece of poetry dear sugaray77! I love the imagery and the wording nears genius.
Thanks for sharing!
Good luck!
Blessings and a big squeeze!
Rebekka x
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2018
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This is an outstanding piece of poetry dear sugaray77! I love the imagery and the wording nears genius.
Thanks for sharing!
Good luck!
Blessings and a big squeeze!
Rebekka x
Comment Written 13-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2018
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Thank you so much. I appreciate your review and confidence. :)
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think this is a good entry for the 'Acrostic Poetry' writing prompt.
A good picture, nicely painted with your verse.
Well done and good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2018
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I think this is a good entry for the 'Acrostic Poetry' writing prompt.
A good picture, nicely painted with your verse.
Well done and good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon
Comment Written 13-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2018
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Thanks so much for the good review.
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Thanks so much for the good review.