Comment from Wetbelly01

Excellent

I can definitely where this poem would do real well in this contest...
It's well written with a fine flow and perfect words on the subject!...
Well Done, as far as I'm concerned!.... Good Luck with the contest!

 Comment Written 15-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 15-Jan-2018

I?m very grateful for your sweet, complimentary support
Hugs, Trisha

reply by Wetbelly01 on 15-Jan-2018

You're very welcome!!

reply by the author on 15-Jan-2018

🙂

reply by Wetbelly01 on 15-Jan-2018

You're very welcome!!

Comment from Gloria ....

Excellent

BL, this is very sweet and most romantic. Mauve is one of my favourite colours as well. The emotion poems involve many of the senses and how we interpret them, and my favourite among yours here is the scent.

Best wishes to you in the love poem contest. I guess it's about that time, eh?

Gloria

 Comment Written 15-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 15-Jan-2018

Hey BC Gloria thank you for stopping by. Yes, there are the signs of Spring ?interests? popping up on the site. LOL I enter so many contests , I don?t remember which is which. Anyway, thanks for your wishes, and review
Hugs,, Trisha

Comment from Sharon Haiste

Excellent

This is a good Love Poem Contest entry.
It tells of a deep love.
In the last line hear our soul mate whispers in my ear - should it be 'your'??
Well done and good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon

 Comment Written 15-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 15-Jan-2018

I ended up changing to ?our intimate whispers? as someone else suggested the other way ! Thanks for your review
Hugs, Trisha

Comment from Asem.inspirations

Excellent

Good morning, Trisha: I see that you posted this yesterday. you are posting so fast that I can't seem to catch up with reading everything. I wonder how those with sixty through three hundred fans every keep up with reading all of their fans work. It just can't be done. Everyday I am reading and reviewing about 35 posts but there is always another 45-60 posts added back. I am going out of my mind with all of this reading.


I do love your Loe Poem entry. This layout looks more like an emotion poem. Dolly challenged me to write one of them. I played around with it but my layout is not correct so I promised her I would post another one and so I shall.

This poem is very lovely and I love the colors that you chose. You must read the emotion poem I posted. My words are different but somewhat similar in places. See we do think alike sometimes. Much love...

 Comment Written 14-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 15-Jan-2018

Now it?s 2 days later, I can?t even keep up with 20+ reviews, thanks, and reviewing others + I?m retired LOL. I wondered the same thing for people who work.
I think you put a lot of perfectionist to your emotion poem. The format was ok on mine, but I too missed the mark. It was strange that your message said disabled or something and would NOT open.
Thanks for 2 day old reviews ha ha ha mucho hugs, Trisha

reply by Asem.inspirations on 15-Jan-2018

Oh it's not disabled. I possibly deleted one of them because I got it wrong the first time but it's up. It's called, "Don't Make Me End This" It's possible still in your message box or you could find it in my portfolio.

reply by the author on 15-Jan-2018

I will review later this evening
,hugs

Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca

Excellent

You need to change the last line, sounds like you are talking to someone else about his/her soulmate. Otherwise it is very well described

 Comment Written 13-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 14-Jan-2018

Positive comments FIRST plz LOL change is done - thanks for watching out for me

Comment from Mustang Patty

Excellent

Hi, Trisha;
Such a lovely love poem and presented just great. I love the photo you found in the hearts, and your words remind me of my own love story. Good luck in the contest,

~patty~

 Comment Written 13-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 15-Jan-2018

That?s a lovely compliment, thank you so much for reviewing. I think many people search for a mate like this and do not find, one.
Hugs, Trisha

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

A romantic write Trisha of your dreams of your lover's smiling face and whispers of love, I wish you luck with the love poem contest, this is lovely, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 13-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 15-Jan-2018

Thanks Dolly, but I think it still missed the bullseye. I?ll try again.
Have a great poetic day
Hugs, Trisha

Comment from Teri7

Excellent

This is a very beautiful love poem you have penned my friend. You used great descriptive wording with all the senses mentioned in this. I love the art work you chose to go with your words. Great job. Best wishes in the contest. Teri

 Comment Written 13-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 15-Jan-2018

Thanks, Teri. Iim so happy you enjoyed this style of poetry. I appreciate your warm hesrted review.
Hugs for a warmer day,Trisha