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Animal poetry and short stories

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Comment from nomi338
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Cute. I see you are full of tricks or something that sounds kinda like it. LOL Anyway this was a nice Acrostic poem. I guess this way you get to indulge two things at once. Showing off your versatility and saluting Amoebas at the same time.

 Comment Written 13-Jan-2018


reply by the author on 14-Jan-2018
    Thanks, nomi, for giving the ?meebs? a look. Bill
Comment from Teri7
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Bill, This is a very well written acrostic poem you have penned about the amoeba. You used very good descriptive words and very good imagery with the art work. When I was in school I was really interesting in this topic! Blessings, Teri

 Comment Written 13-Jan-2018


reply by the author on 13-Jan-2018
    Thanks, Teri
Comment from Ulla
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Bill this is a great acrostic. Who other than you could compose one featuring an amoeba? Well, I read it that they could grow a big ego if you let them. Wonderful picture to go with it. I love it, and it made me smile. Good luck in the contest. Ulla:))

 Comment Written 13-Jan-2018


reply by the author on 13-Jan-2018
    My wife says I?m brilliant, so that's why she wears dark sunglasses when we?re out together.
reply by Ulla on 13-Jan-2018
    Hahahaha!!!
Comment from Asem.inspirations
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Good morning, Bill: It's great to see that you are posting again. This is a great Acrostic Poem and a good entry for this contest. You have given us a small lesson on amoebas and took me back to the school days science lessons on amoebas. Thank you for this information.

 Comment Written 13-Jan-2018


reply by the author on 13-Jan-2018
    Thanks, Tier
Comment from Phyllis Stewart
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Only you could create a poem series based on the lowly amoeba. LOL You make a good point--size is relative. There are bound to be "huge" amoebas, still too small for us to see. Scrambles my brain to imagine it. :)

 Comment Written 13-Jan-2018


reply by the author on 13-Jan-2018
    Thanks, Phyllis. How many amoeba can you fit in a Volkswagen? Two in front and two in the back.
Comment from Gloria ....
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Whoa, that amoeba looks like a bear, no a duck, no a lamb, oh I give up. At any rate is looks very cute and this is signature you and a superb acrostic too!

Best wishes to you in the contest with this beautiful big poem.

Gloria

 Comment Written 13-Jan-2018


reply by the author on 13-Jan-2018
    Thanks, Gloria.
Comment from BOO ghost
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Unique looking acrostic, Bill. Like the rainbow like colors. Like the acrostic, itself. AMOEBA. Wise words and very delightful to look upon. Good imagination to come up with this wee word that is invisible to the naked eye but matters and makes up dark matter. Nice poem.
BOO Ghost.

 Comment Written 13-Jan-2018


reply by the author on 13-Jan-2018
    Thanks, BOO
Comment from Sherman541
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You must be a science buff, professor or you just like amoeba. I remember back in College Biology learning something about amoeba, but I had most likely forgotten most of what I learned. They say, if you do not use it you lose it. ;) Very nicely written. I wish you luck in the Contest !! Sherman541

 Comment Written 12-Jan-2018


reply by the author on 13-Jan-2018
    Thanks, Sherman, for the upbeat review. Bill
Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux
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This is a good poem. I enjoyed it and the artwork also! Thanks for sharing, and good luck with any of the contest . I look forward to reading more of your work.

 Comment Written 12-Jan-2018


reply by the author on 13-Jan-2018
    Thanks, Jeff
Comment from Sharon Haiste
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I think this is a good entry for the Acrostic Poem writing prompt.
Well written within the Acrostic structure and keeping with your current theme.
Well done and good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon

 Comment Written 12-Jan-2018


reply by the author on 13-Jan-2018
    Thanks, Sharon