Comment from Chrissy710

Excellent

Hi Bill, well this Librian omoeba created a gemini off spring . No a bad effort I will keep her LOL Bill as always inventive and fun. Cheers Christine. Good luck in the contest

 Comment Written 15-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 15-Jan-2018

Thanks, Christine, for the kind review. Bill

Comment from nomi338

Excellent

Welcome back Bill. You have been missed. You scared me when you reveal your much deeper self in a couple of review comments. I did not know what to do. I could not believe that it was you, I was about to demand that you prove yourself. LOL.

 Comment Written 13-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 14-Jan-2018

Thanks for sticking with me.

Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux

Excellent

I like this poem. I like the flow and content. It was well written and very well done. The accompanying artwork was nicely done and spot on. Thank you for sharing this. I look forward to reading more of your work.

 Comment Written 13-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 13-Jan-2018

Thanks, Jeff

Comment from Ulla

Excellent

Ohhhh, Bill, what Am I to make of this one? I'm a Gemini, does that then follow I am an amoeba? LOL. A wonderful play with words it sure is. I loved it. All the best. Ulla:))

 Comment Written 13-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 13-Jan-2018

This amoeba will be a Gemini during mitosis.

Comment from Phyllis Stewart

Excellent

Maybe amoeba
are Gemini or Libra
Read their microscope

LOL! I love it! They do have astrological signs, you know, for they had to be born, or come into existence on some calendar day. I wonder if the Taureans are stubborn like me. :)

 Comment Written 13-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 13-Jan-2018

May 15th. Don't mess with the bull.

reply by Phyllis Stewart on 13-Jan-2018

So we are both bulls. Cool. My bday is May 12th. :)

Comment from Gloria ....

Excellent

Ha, you always crack me up, Bill. This is a fantastic pun, perhaps one of the best I've ever read. Now we all have a new pick up line to use too.

Read their microscope. Brilliant my friend.

Gloria

 Comment Written 13-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 13-Jan-2018

Thanks, Gloria. You're too kind.

Comment from Sherman541

Excellent

Well I live with a Gemini and I can relate to him possibly being the amoeba. Just kidding about the amoeba. Short Sweet and to the point. Good Luck in the Contest!! Sherman541

 Comment Written 12-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 13-Jan-2018

Sometimes he'll get on your last nerve cell.

reply by Sherman541 on 13-Jan-2018

that could for sure be, but then again when you live with some one in tight quarters and share so many things - I think it is hard not to touch upon a nerve to two, last one or not :)

Comment from BeasPeas

Excellent

Excellent. But Gemini is helter-skelter and Libra is balance. Maybe the amoeba combination isn't so distorted after all. The microscope tells all. Marilyn

 Comment Written 12-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 13-Jan-2018

Thanks, Marilyn. Could be a Pisces in there. You know what that means.

Comment from Alec Gould

Excellent

So late in the day, this brought a smile to my face. Well done my friend. A most different topic, out of the box. I like it. Have a great weekend! ~Alec

 Comment Written 12-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 13-Jan-2018

Thanks, Alec

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

Lol. Well, "microscope" kinda sounds like "horoscope" but not quite the same. I'm guessing that the picture is one of the two signs and I'll guess it's the Libra but it doesn't look like twins to me.

 Comment Written 12-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 13-Jan-2018

I was looking for a cell in mitosis, to represent the twins. Got called away.