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Viewing comments for Chapter 15 "Love"Eclectic style
8 total reviews
Comment from Asem.inspirations
Good morning, Trisha: You have picked a great subject for a great poem describing how special it is to have someone in life. Your syllable count is right on point. I am loving this loving post.
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2018
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Good morning, Trisha: You have picked a great subject for a great poem describing how special it is to have someone in life. Your syllable count is right on point. I am loving this loving post.
Comment Written 12-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2018
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If only relationships always were that simple
Thanks for reviewing it, have a super day
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from smileycloud
good form strong submission
perfect meeting of the prompt
you certainly nailed the meaning and action of love in your beautiful poem
blessings
have a smiley day
Lorraine
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2018
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good form strong submission
perfect meeting of the prompt
you certainly nailed the meaning and action of love in your beautiful poem
blessings
have a smiley day
Lorraine
Comment Written 11-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2018
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Great big hug for your wonderful review.
Trisha
Comment from Cheryl I
I enjoyed reading your poem and the graphic you chose is perfectly suited for the words. I like the idea that the whirl is created by hearts giving and taking love. Very nice - Cheryl
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2018
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I enjoyed reading your poem and the graphic you chose is perfectly suited for the words. I like the idea that the whirl is created by hearts giving and taking love. Very nice - Cheryl
Comment Written 11-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2018
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Thank you! Love is butterflies, heart fluttering , head in a whirl wonderful . Too bad it can?t last forever'
Hugs! Trisha
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello Bucketlist
Excl lent tanka of how a loving couple both are tender and caring for each other can make a very strong loving Bond
Gert
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2018
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Hello Bucketlist
Excl lent tanka of how a loving couple both are tender and caring for each other can make a very strong loving Bond
Gert
Comment Written 11-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2018
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It takes work too! Thanks Gert. Did you see my post ?Homesick?.? The picture is of Burlington?s market place.
Happy 2018
Thanks for reviewing
Hugs, Trisha
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You are welcome Trisha
Will look for your posting
Gert
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is romantic and loving Trisha, you have captured love's roller coaster in these few lines and the sweet tender feelings of love live within your words, delightful, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2018
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This is romantic and loving Trisha, you have captured love's roller coaster in these few lines and the sweet tender feelings of love live within your words, delightful, love Dolly x
Comment Written 11-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2018
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Thank you so much , hugs, Trisha
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
An excellent description of love. It is the taking and giving equally that keeps the love going and growing always. Very nicely done.
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2018
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An excellent description of love. It is the taking and giving equally that keeps the love going and growing always. Very nicely done.
Comment Written 11-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2018
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Thanks, you are after all, the Romance Queen in my opinion.
Have a fun weekend
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Cycler
Beautiful thoughts; perfectly constructed. And the picture fulfills the words that you've said. Thank you for sharing this work of art; it's an insightful pause in life to relish.
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2018
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Beautiful thoughts; perfectly constructed. And the picture fulfills the words that you've said. Thank you for sharing this work of art; it's an insightful pause in life to relish.
Comment Written 11-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2018
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Your complimentary review was so great, thank you.
Trisha
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Your complimentary review was so great, thank you.
Trisha
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Your complimentary review was so great, thank you.
Trisha
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
This meets the contest requirements splendidly with a correct line and syllable count. The content is of a romantic nature and since this form as once used to express love between to people you have hit the nail on the head with this submission. All the best in the judging and thank you very much for sharing it.
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2018
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This meets the contest requirements splendidly with a correct line and syllable count. The content is of a romantic nature and since this form as once used to express love between to people you have hit the nail on the head with this submission. All the best in the judging and thank you very much for sharing it.
Comment Written 11-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2018
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You?re welcome for me sharing! I feel blessed that any level would review my penning, I appreciate your loyalty to review mine Have a great week
Hugs, Trisha