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"ALL IN THE FAMILY."

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Comment from A. Louise Robertson
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You know children well, as this poem illustrates. I've observed kids doing exactly what you are saying here. This poem will be enjoyed by children and their parents.


 Comment Written 10-Jan-2018

Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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Children just being themselves and hanging our at home and I miss those times, your poem reminded me of when my house was filled with laughter, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 10-Jan-2018

Comment from Sharon Haiste
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I think this is a good entry for the 'Children's Rhyming Poem' writing prompt.
Well done. Good story, very well rhymed.
Good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon

 Comment Written 09-Jan-2018