Comment from Teri7

Excellent

Bill, This is a very well written 5-7-5 poem you have penned. You used very good descriptive words and very good imagery with the art work. Blessings, Teri

 Comment Written 13-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 14-Jan-2018

Thanks, Teri

Comment from smileycloud

Excellent

great to see it is not biographical LOL
good poem
well spoken
good strong imagery
reminds me of a really old film about a man whose brother had some bug put into his ear (instead of nose) and it was sending him balmy
have a smiley day
Lorraine

 Comment Written 12-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 12-Jan-2018

I saw that one. It was on Night Gallery. He got an earwig in his ear and it ate from one side to the other and left out the other ear. It laid eggs on the way through.

reply by smileycloud on 12-Jan-2018

yeah
thats it
have a smiley

Comment from BeasPeas

Excellent

Great job. I really like this one. Now we're into amoeba. Scary stuff. Those little buggers can kill us. Where do we go from here. I'll wait and see. Marilyn

 Comment Written 12-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 12-Jan-2018

Thanks, Marilyn. I'll try to get one out today.

Comment from nomi338

Excellent

I can tell. As I read this cannibalistic tale I was made to wonder, I s there a life form he won't write about. The obvious answer must be, no, there is not a lifeform he will not write about. Oh well, then I guess my only advise is to keep it interesting.

 Comment Written 10-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 10-Jan-2018

Amoeba prone to write more about these cute little fellows.

Comment from damommy

Excellent

Uh-oh. That can't be good. Maybe that's what's wrong with me, too.

I'm looking forward to what comes next in the amoeba world.

 Comment Written 10-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 10-Jan-2018

Thanks, da

Comment from Mystic Angel 7777

Excellent

LOL! This is great, my friend. You really should have saved this for a humorous 5-7-5 contest for it smacks of winner. It's not only creative but something nobody else has used as a theme so it is refreshing. Well done and thank you very much for sharing it.

 Comment Written 10-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 10-Jan-2018

Thanks, MA, for the kind review. Bill

Comment from BOO ghost

Excellent

Yep, they may be. Nice looking presentation. Creative words to boot. Maybe BOO has one brain cell? Size of an Amoeba. Like the blue color. Enjoyed this. It is BOO-tastic! Not being sarcastic.

 Comment Written 10-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 10-Jan-2018

Thanks, BOO

Comment from Jay Squires

Excellent

By the time it finishes its munchies it will have two cells. It's the way of evolution right? I hope you entered this in the 5-7-5 contest. Did you?

 Comment Written 09-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 10-Jan-2018

I don't have enough readers to win contests. I just do stuff for me. Thanks for the kind review, Jay.

reply by Jay Squires on 10-Jan-2018

The readers don' vote, Bill. A contest committee votes. Some of your stuff would blow the competition out of the water.

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

Yikes!! Glad to see you posting again, Bill! I wonder what the amoebas will do next. I first heard about brain eating amoebas which killed someone who did the nasal rinsing with unsterilized tap water in Louisiana.

 Comment Written 09-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 11-Jan-2018

Thanks, lyenochka, for giving this a look.

Comment from Gloria ....

Excellent

Haaaaaaa, oh that's a pleasant thought. An one eyed purple brain eating amoeba. I gotta tell you though, Bill. This cracked me up. Great humour in this fiveseventyfive. You should've entered it into the contest though. It's a winner! Oh well there must be more where that came from, yes?

Thanks for the good chuckle.

Gloria

 Comment Written 09-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 11-Jan-2018

Thanks, Gloria. Believing amoeba can do this is a hard 'cell'.