Baby Toes
A Rhyme for Children11 total reviews
Comment from rhonnie69
Happy New year SUGARRAY77: I am a children's writer. I have been one for numerous years. During that time I've written many poems for our children. That's why I can relate to your poem, Baby Toes. I would recommend this poem to any parent, to share with their children. Good job. Well done. rhonnie69.
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2018
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Happy New year SUGARRAY77: I am a children's writer. I have been one for numerous years. During that time I've written many poems for our children. That's why I can relate to your poem, Baby Toes. I would recommend this poem to any parent, to share with their children. Good job. Well done. rhonnie69.
Comment Written 11-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2018
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Thank you so much. I appreciate your comments and review!
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Thank you so much. I appreciate your comments and review!
Comment from Joy Graham
Dear Mystery Poet,
This is a sweet poem about counting baby toes. My granddaughter, Molly, loves when I do This Little Piggy with her toes. I'm not sure a baby would catch on to counting by twos and threes. However, just talking to kids provides wonderful stimulation.
I enjoyed your rhymes and silly words like toodles and woodles at the beginning of each stanza.
Best wishes in the contest.
Sincerely Joy xx
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2018
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Dear Mystery Poet,
This is a sweet poem about counting baby toes. My granddaughter, Molly, loves when I do This Little Piggy with her toes. I'm not sure a baby would catch on to counting by twos and threes. However, just talking to kids provides wonderful stimulation.
I enjoyed your rhymes and silly words like toodles and woodles at the beginning of each stanza.
Best wishes in the contest.
Sincerely Joy xx
Comment Written 10-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2018
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Thanks so much. I look forward to being a grandparent. Dr. Seuss inspired the silliness.
Comment from Dean Kuch
Hahaha. You'd be surprised to learn how many children know what "google" is and does, Anonymous, heh-heh.
Or maybe you wouldn't.
Regardless of that, this was an outstanding rhyming poem for children, very cute. It's exactly the kind of poetry kids adore.
Good luck to you in the contest.
~Dean :)
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2018
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Hahaha. You'd be surprised to learn how many children know what "google" is and does, Anonymous, heh-heh.
Or maybe you wouldn't.
Regardless of that, this was an outstanding rhyming poem for children, very cute. It's exactly the kind of poetry kids adore.
Good luck to you in the contest.
~Dean :)
Comment Written 10-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2018
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Thanks so much!
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Thanks so much!
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It was my pleasure. :)
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written fun poem about babies' toes. Babies love it when we play with their toes and sing a song that goes along with the wiggling of their toes. The bottom foot of the baby on the photo seems to only have four toes.
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2018
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A very well-written fun poem about babies' toes. Babies love it when we play with their toes and sing a song that goes along with the wiggling of their toes. The bottom foot of the baby on the photo seems to only have four toes.
Comment Written 09-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2018
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Thanks so much. I thought there were four toes too, but finally made out the fifth one.
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Thanks so much. I thought there were four toes too, but finally made out the fifth one.
Comment from Dan Diego
This is two children's poems in a row that showed up for review and I feel young again. I like the goofy and fun word choices (toodles, woodles, shuzzle, duzzle), but my spell-checker did not. If the purpose of a children's poem is to bring joy to the mind of a child, you did that well with this 60 year old boy. I really liked it. It felt like something that could be read to a child when preparing for bed. Good luck in the booth.
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2018
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This is two children's poems in a row that showed up for review and I feel young again. I like the goofy and fun word choices (toodles, woodles, shuzzle, duzzle), but my spell-checker did not. If the purpose of a children's poem is to bring joy to the mind of a child, you did that well with this 60 year old boy. I really liked it. It felt like something that could be read to a child when preparing for bed. Good luck in the booth.
Comment Written 09-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2018
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Thanks a lot Dan!
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Thanks a lot Dan!
Comment from RodG
This is a wonderful poem for all the young mothers and/ or grandmothers out there. Wonderful use of imaginative onomatopoia to begin the first three stanzas. I can almost see those toes being counted.
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2018
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This is a wonderful poem for all the young mothers and/ or grandmothers out there. Wonderful use of imaginative onomatopoia to begin the first three stanzas. I can almost see those toes being counted.
Comment Written 09-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2018
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Thanks so much!
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Thanks so much!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I love the little made up words that all children love and this poem has such a fun subject, I wish you luck with the contest, a fun write, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2018
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I love the little made up words that all children love and this poem has such a fun subject, I wish you luck with the contest, a fun write, love Dolly x
Comment Written 09-Jan-2018
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Thanks so much!
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Thanks so much!
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think this is a very good entry for the 'Children's Rhyming Poem' writing prompt.
Well written and well said. What is it about baby parts that make adults act like kids?
Well done and good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2018
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I think this is a very good entry for the 'Children's Rhyming Poem' writing prompt.
Well written and well said. What is it about baby parts that make adults act like kids?
Well done and good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon
Comment Written 09-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2018
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Hahaha. Thanks so much!
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Hahaha. Thanks so much!
Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux
Awe, that was so cute! The artwork was perfect! Babies are so adorable! Thank you for sharing such a cute poem. It made me smile. Keep up the good work. I look forward to reading more of your work.
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2018
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Awe, that was so cute! The artwork was perfect! Babies are so adorable! Thank you for sharing such a cute poem. It made me smile. Keep up the good work. I look forward to reading more of your work.
Comment Written 09-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2018
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Thanks so much!
Comment from A. Louise Robertson
Absolutely an adorable poem. I love the made-up words, they fit just fine here. This is a fun verse to read to kids, I think it would make them giggle - as it did me!
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reply by the author on 09-Jan-2018
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Absolutely an adorable poem. I love the made-up words, they fit just fine here. This is a fun verse to read to kids, I think it would make them giggle - as it did me!
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The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 09-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2018
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Thanks so much!
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Thanks so much!
