Comment from debbielynn

Exceptional

I can relate to this. I never tried to write a 1-6-1poem. Although it looks simple I am sure it would be difficult to do. Very poignant and heartwrenching for me since I lost my father when he was very young.

 Comment Written 08-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 08-Jan-2018

Thanks for the great comments and super stars.

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

Children feel this loss more than we realise and your words are poignant and sad, this is a difficult prompt 1-6-1, but your poem speaks volumes, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 08-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 08-Jan-2018

Thanks so much. I am so glad you liked it. Love Jen. X

Comment from Cal Amborn

Excellent

A powerful message with so few words. Nicely written. Also, nice photo. The second line sounds eloquent, I'm sure it was hard to nail the six syllable LOL.

 Comment Written 08-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 08-Jan-2018

Many thanks for reading and reviewing.

Comment from RodG

Excellent

That face plus this very short poem really capture the meaning of LOSS to a young child. A universal story seen too often around the world today.
Good luck in the contest.

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 Comment Written 07-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 07-Jan-2018

Many thanks for your review

Comment from Sugarray77

Excellent

A good 1-6-1 prompt contest entry. I thought the photograph was perfect for your subject and added the right touch. Good luck on this contest. Regards.

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 Comment Written 07-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 07-Jan-2018

Many thanks