Comment from kiwigirl2821

Excellent

Hi Mystery Writer. I liked the premise of this one. It is a beauty and the presentation is awesome. To have style one must smile. Good thoughts. Good luck. xoxo Kiwi

 Comment Written 08-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 09-Jan-2018

Thank you so much for your kind review.

Comment from Sugarray77

Excellent

A good 1-6-1 prompt contest entry. I thought the photograph was perfect for your subject and added the right touch. Good luck on this contest. Regards.

 Comment Written 07-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 07-Jan-2018

Thanks for the review.

Comment from Dean Kuch

Excellent

It never hurts to smile, Anonymous Poet.
In fact, scientific studies claim that it takes many more facial muscles to frown than it does to muster a smile.
So, having said that, we should all turn our frowns upside down...and smile.
Good luck to you!
~Dean

 Comment Written 07-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 07-Jan-2018

Thank you for your special review.

reply by Dean Kuch on 07-Jan-2018

Anytime.

Comment from Sharon Haiste

Excellent

I think this is a good entry for the 1-6-1 writing prompt.
A good message in your few words and a lovely picture besides.
Well done and good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon

 Comment Written 07-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 07-Jan-2018

Thanks.

Comment from kathleenspalding

Excellent

Very pretty! Excellent one - six - one poem fulfills the prompt well and gives great advice using very few words. Perfect choice of artwork. Great job!

 Comment Written 07-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 07-Jan-2018

Thanks.

Comment from heavenempress

Excellent

Wwaal, the splendid and beautifully small. It takes a lot of energy and thinking to come up with this powerful piece of work. Doubtlessly, there is a flow that is quite rhythmical. Keep it up. I recommend your work highly to others.

 Comment Written 07-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 07-Jan-2018

Thank you for that great review.

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

I love this, because I have been in walks for charity and when you know there is only a mile to go it is such a relief, you can think of nothing else! I could identify with your write, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 07-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 07-Jan-2018

Thank you for your review.

Comment from Mystic Angel 7777

Excellent

This meets the contest requirements nicely with a correct line and syllable count. Adding rhyme enhances the overall tone of the piece. It's true that to die with grace and dignity is a blessing. All the best in the voting and thank you very much for sharing it.

 Comment Written 07-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 07-Jan-2018

Thank you for your review.