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Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
I really liked how you played off of the crucifixion when recounting your own pains. The poetry I did for my Dad's recent funeral centers around how important our own personal agonies are in assisting other souls to salvation. Nicely done and thank you very much for sharing it.
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2018
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I really liked how you played off of the crucifixion when recounting your own pains. The poetry I did for my Dad's recent funeral centers around how important our own personal agonies are in assisting other souls to salvation. Nicely done and thank you very much for sharing it.
Comment Written 04-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2018
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Sorry about your dad my concern was his first and thanks as always Mystic for you wonderful time and review and welcome to 2018 and I hope 2018 is much better for you when it comes to 2017 doctor Ricky 1024
Comment from Asem.inspirations
Good morning, Ricky. This is a good spiritual share. I like the rhyme words that you chose to explain Jesus' sacrifice. It is only a good thing and what God wants when we share this information and speak the truth to others. The below words are my favorite lines:
"The Oceans of Azure Blue!"
"The Many Rainbows of Multi-Hue!
"The Fluffy, White, Clouds and Sky of Bluen Relief!"
"Come, take My Hand and understand!"
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"Yes, now come and see!"
"Come and see with Me!"
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"And, take My Hand for you can not understand!"
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"That there is something...
"And, that there is nothing?"
"Yes, nothing for you to see?"
"If only you could be more...
"Like Me?"
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2018
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Good morning, Ricky. This is a good spiritual share. I like the rhyme words that you chose to explain Jesus' sacrifice. It is only a good thing and what God wants when we share this information and speak the truth to others. The below words are my favorite lines:
"The Oceans of Azure Blue!"
"The Many Rainbows of Multi-Hue!
"The Fluffy, White, Clouds and Sky of Bluen Relief!"
"Come, take My Hand and understand!"
...
"Yes, now come and see!"
"Come and see with Me!"
...
"And, take My Hand for you can not understand!"
...
"That there is something...
"And, that there is nothing?"
"Yes, nothing for you to see?"
"If only you could be more...
"Like Me?"
Comment Written 04-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2018
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Once in awhile we can write something that more than just touches ourselves and we realize it's one of those one out of a thousand dr. Ricky 1024
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
Prologues to two works are so amply introduced and the concept of pain is supernaturally expressed; nice work done, invisible existence is interesting, it was a pleasant read. DR ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2018
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Prologues to two works are so amply introduced and the concept of pain is supernaturally expressed; nice work done, invisible existence is interesting, it was a pleasant read. DR ALCREATOR
Comment Written 04-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2018
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Thanks again Al Creator.
Dr Ricky 1024
