FAMILY TIES.
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Comment from apky
This was so real that any reader could identify with it.
Best of all I loved your sense of humour in this dialogu
only write. Without any need for descriptions you give
the reader the whole picture - age, social standing, gender.
A great job.
Good luck with the contest.
And I wish you all the best for the New Year.
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This was so real that any reader could identify with it.
Best of all I loved your sense of humour in this dialogu
only write. Without any need for descriptions you give
the reader the whole picture - age, social standing, gender.
A great job.
Good luck with the contest.
And I wish you all the best for the New Year.
Comment Written 02-Jan-2018
Comment from Sharon Haiste
This is a good entry for the Dialogue Only writing prompt.
Your story is well told and easy to follow.
Well done and good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon
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This is a good entry for the Dialogue Only writing prompt.
Your story is well told and easy to follow.
Well done and good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon
Comment Written 02-Jan-2018