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Viewing comments for Chapter 15 "Ring out the Old, Ring in the New"
religious and holiday poetry
4 total reviews
Comment from
Teri7
This is a very well written New Years poem you have penned. You used very good descriptive wording with very good colors for the font and great imagery from the art work. I will be 62 in July Good Lord's willing! Blessings, Teri
Comment Written 02-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2018
Dear Teri, Thank you for your comments and review. Donna
Comment from
Dolly'sPoems
Celebrate your birthday and have a good time, the new year and a birthday means you will have a great fun, your poem is a tribute for this new year, enjoy, love Dolly x
Comment Written 02-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2018
Dear Dolly, Thank you for your comments and review. dovemarie
Comment from
Sharon Haiste
This is a lovely poem about ringing in the new year.
Well written, well rhymed, well done.
I find the red on green a little bit hard to read though.
Thank you for sharing this one.
Sharon
Comment Written 02-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2018
Dear Sharon, Thank you for your comments and review. Dove P.S. I will change the coloring.
Comment from
Mustang Patty
Hi, Dove;
Thank you for sharing your thoughts on the New Year.
One suggestion; change the red on green. It glares a bit and makes for difficult reading. Enjoyed the rhyme scheme,
~patty~
Comment Written 02-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2018
Dear patty, Thank you for your comments and review. I will change the coloring. Dove