Comment from frogbook

Excellent

What a great pic, my friend and a wonderful write to go with it. such a tragedy and you always write so eloquently about this.

 Comment Written 02-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 02-Jan-2018

Thanks my dear and welcome to the house of suffering to learn more about that just review more talk to Ricky 1024

Comment from kiwigirl2821

Excellent

Hello Ricky. You know mate I think we are all given a sacred mission upon entering our life and the journey we undertake. Everything that happens within that sacred mission just makes the journey that much more important. Your son has the right of it on this one methinks. We don't get the answers only the tiny baby steps to procuring a life that is at least tolerable. Wonderful write. xoxo Kiwi

 Comment Written 02-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 02-Jan-2018

Why thanks for your wonderful review.
Time, and comments.
Dr Ricky 1024. Appreciate that cycle especially since it's the first time that you've ever reviewed any my work doctor Ricky 1024

reply by kiwigirl2821 on 02-Jan-2018

Ricky it is a privilege to be included in reading your work and I hope to read many many more in the coming new year :) xoxo Kiwi

Comment from Cycler

Excellent

Nice .. your words and dialogue depicting the circumstances ... as well as what is beyond. Thanks for sharing this in Fanstory. It is a beautiful dedication, Ricky :-)

 Comment Written 01-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 02-Jan-2018

Again thanks

Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear

Excellent

This speaks bereaved father thinks his lost son Jason from above living a life and now he does not think dad's time to go and live with his son as a friend, now not the right moment; I liked. DR ALCREATOR

 Comment Written 01-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 01-Jan-2018

Thanks Al created as always your friend dr. Ricky 1024 and happy New Year

Comment from mermaids

Excellent

This is a comforting poem and I like how it is written from your son Jason. Those who have passed on, have a voice in poetry. Congrats for winning the award for this poem.

 Comment Written 30-Dec-2017

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reply by the author on 30-Dec-2017

How do you friend was my first poem out of hundreds of thousands it's kicked off my writing my abilities My Rewards my plaques trophies certificates my doctorate's degree it also had to start with the death of a child of only 18 three weeks afterwards on his computer is Dell computer finding a site offering $5,000 to the winter with the enough Sadia poetry I knew when to 5019 care about that as much but the recognition in the trophy was priceless plus I had a chance to present not only that beautiful poem but within a three-minute spectre I had two and a half minutes to teach people if they have a child of driving age or close to it to make sure you know who your child is Rock driving with or you would end up in my situation talk to Ricky 1024 thanks for your kind thoughts and review

Comment from Sis Cat

Excellent

First of all, Ricky, I'm sorry for the devastating loss of your son Jason. The pain and the loss never goes away. I can sense in your words of agony a struggle to understand this and to join your son:

"But dad."
"It's too soon for you."
"Dad, your time yet is not had!"
"And, even though the cards are stacked against you...
"I see you seem to have cut to the high card each and every **Time?"
...

Your son comforts you, the grieving father:

"I'm not here right now but I'm not far...
"I'm in a place...
"Close by like a Star...

Thank you for sharing your poem which must have been hard to write. I am glad it received a trophy in Washington. I am also glad you donated his organ.

I close my review with your words:

"Special thanks goes out first to Heavenly Father and His Son Jesus the Christ,"

 Comment Written 30-Dec-2017

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reply by the author on 30-Dec-2017

Thanks sis cat once in a millennium we will give birth to a special child not only an angel but a gifting Angels put here on one purpose one purpose only to die sacrifice his life so we could save many many others and I say these things in the name of Jesus Christ amen

Comment from John A Catania

Exceptional

Love it Great stuff.





















John A Catania

 Comment Written 30-Dec-2017

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reply by the author on 30-Dec-2017

Glad you enjoy this would what if you others John and I thank you along with my son Jason

Comment from Asem.inspirations

Excellent

Good morning again, Ricky: This is another bitter-sweet poem about the loss of your son. This one is short and brief but it still says much of your love for him and how we as parents find it so hard to move on after the death of any of our children. I do know this pain, my friend. I know it so dearly and I still suffer it as well. Stay strong my friend. You will see him again as God promises. Much love...

 Comment Written 30-Dec-2017

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reply by the author on 30-Dec-2017

Thanks and so true my dear Tier...
Dr Ricky 1024.

Comment from Sandra du Plessis

Excellent

A very well-written heartfelt poem. We often wonder why someone has to go before us. We will never know the real answer, but I think we should live our lives as best we can before we are called.

 Comment Written 29-Dec-2017

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reply by the author on 29-Dec-2017

Thanks and so true, Sandra.
Ricky...

Comment from BeasPeas

Excellent

I'm sorry you lost your son. A very painful thing. Blessings to you. God takes us when he wants us back. Your poem reflects this toward the end. Marilyn

 Comment Written 28-Dec-2017

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reply by the author on 28-Dec-2017

Max Maryland this means a lot to meet Ricky and have a Happy New Year