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Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
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You deliver a well executed Acrostic eloquently enumerating that important aspects of LDS tenets. Nicely done and thank you very much for sharing it.

 Comment Written 23-Dec-2017

reply by the author on 23-Dec-2017
    Well Mystic angel you know the Latter-day Saint Church of Jesus Christ sorry abbreviation is the ALDS and perhaps you live in Salt Lake where are or want point I member hit me up on that thanks dr. Ricky 1024
Comment from Joan E.
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I admired your use of the acrostic form and your dramatic presentation for this faith poem and description of the Latter Day Saints. I appreciated the repeats of "teachers" and "saints" for emphasis.

 Comment Written 23-Dec-2017

reply by the author on 23-Dec-2017
    The previous one I wrote on the same subject which I was going to put in a contest and I lost it was a lot harder in much better maybe one day I'll find it I have thousands or hundreds of thousands of homes in 650 bucks on my house so it'll be undertaking dr. Ricky 1024 and thanks for your time and review
Comment from Dawn Munro
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Wow, Ricky, what a beautiful presentation for your lovely poem - you chose fabulous artwork. You sure did make this a herculean task, with so many words in the title. VERY well done! Merry Christmas!

 Comment Written 23-Dec-2017

reply by the author on 23-Dec-2017
    Hi Dawn this one was actually much easier than the first when I wrote that I've somehow misplaced among hundreds of thousands of homes in my house the previous one Rhymes a lot better because that when I was creating I saw in that method which makes it much much harder to present.
    Dr Ricky 1024.Later today
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
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A very well-written acrostic poem about the church of Christ. God wants us to be like children obedient and depending on Him at all times. When we are willing to be like a child and love Him above all, He will be our Father.

 Comment Written 23-Dec-2017

reply by the author on 23-Dec-2017
    So true Sandra and there's only a couple more days till Christmas you got your shopping done dr. Ricky 1024
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
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This is a compact and comprehensive acrostic poem about teachings and treats of human at each Church all ways to human salvation irrespective of religion; I like. DR ALCREATOR

 Comment Written 22-Dec-2017

reply by the author on 23-Dec-2017
    Thanks Alcreator I am and my Saviour are honored.
    Dr Ricky 1024.
Comment from Sharon Haiste
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Well done.
Your beautiful picture is a wonderful match to your well structured and well written poem.
Using so few words per line really adds punch to the meaning.
Sharon

 Comment Written 22-Dec-2017

reply by the author on 23-Dec-2017
    Glad you enjoyed this Sharon and Happy Holidays!
    Dr Ricky 1024.Later today