The Book of Fine Poetry
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Comment from Asem.inspirations
Good morning again, Ricky: I see that you write many, many poem in remembrance of your son and your wife. There is nothing wrong with that. I have written a whole book of poetry devoted to all of the loss but especially devoted to the loss of my oldest son, Tyrene. So I truly understand you need to write about this. This is a good poem and I hope and wish the best for you. Much love and hugs. Stay strong, my friend.
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2017
Good morning again, Ricky: I see that you write many, many poem in remembrance of your son and your wife. There is nothing wrong with that. I have written a whole book of poetry devoted to all of the loss but especially devoted to the loss of my oldest son, Tyrene. So I truly understand you need to write about this. This is a good poem and I hope and wish the best for you. Much love and hugs. Stay strong, my friend.
Comment Written 24-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2017
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Thanks Tier for understanding our many losses.
Dr Ricky 1024.
Comment from Dorothy Farrell
Oh Ricky, My heart goes out to you. Your poem is so moving and it tells a very sad story. You donated your son's heart after the accident so he has given someone else the chance to live, and through that gift of his he also lives on. My very best wishes to you and God Bless. Have a good Christmas and may you be blessed with good health and happiness in the New Year 2018. Warm regards Dorothy x
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2017
Oh Ricky, My heart goes out to you. Your poem is so moving and it tells a very sad story. You donated your son's heart after the accident so he has given someone else the chance to live, and through that gift of his he also lives on. My very best wishes to you and God Bless. Have a good Christmas and may you be blessed with good health and happiness in the New Year 2018. Warm regards Dorothy x
Comment Written 23-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2017
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Thanks Dorothy yes Jason's heart and lungs winning on man named Chaz is written me three times his letters are going into a gift of Life Book his left kidney went into an unknown woman from South Jersey she was just a child now she's a woman in her early twenties while his right kidney went into a man who wrote me also several times by the name of Bill who was waiting on his deathbed to die and his evil wife was ready to step right in and claim everything he had left now since he didn't die they divorced and his daughter cares for him is liver when an old man from Philadelphia who lived eight years have a nice holiday talk to Ricky 1024
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written heartfelt poem. The greatest gift we can give or receive is a gift that can ensure life. To be an organ donor we can be a great giver of life to another when we have no chance to live.
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2017
A very well-written heartfelt poem. The greatest gift we can give or receive is a gift that can ensure life. To be an organ donor we can be a great giver of life to another when we have no chance to live.
Comment Written 23-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2017
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Thanks again Sandra and Merry Christmas.
Dr. Ricky 1024
Comment from beizanten
An interesting and intriguing beginning stanza, you capture my attention. A good second stanza. A well written third stanza. Overal a very written and interesting spiritual poetry
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2017
An interesting and intriguing beginning stanza, you capture my attention. A good second stanza. A well written third stanza. Overal a very written and interesting spiritual poetry
Comment Written 22-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2017
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Thanks beizanten.
Jason as well as myself...
Appreciate this.
Dr Ricky 1024
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
What better thing than the gift of life to give any time of year and allow life to pass on and be fullifilled. Very well done
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2017
What better thing than the gift of life to give any time of year and allow life to pass on and be fullifilled. Very well done
Comment Written 22-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2017
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Life is temporary life is Celestial life is forever Merry Christmas talk to Ricky 1024
Comment from D.F. Wood
Very touching. I am so sorry for your loss. This time of year brings much sadness and happiness at the same time. I have some personal losses this year myself, and my heart aches. God Bless You for having the courage to share. Merry Christmas.
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2017
Very touching. I am so sorry for your loss. This time of year brings much sadness and happiness at the same time. I have some personal losses this year myself, and my heart aches. God Bless You for having the courage to share. Merry Christmas.
Comment Written 22-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2017
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Thanks Daniel on my condolences also for your losses my nordau 14 years ago so I've learned to live with it to a limited degree doctor Ricky 1024
Comment from Paul Bownas
God bless you Ricky and comfort you at this time. I think this is an amazing poem, and written with such feeling that it cannot be ignored! My wife and I are both organ donors, and cannot understand why, particularly in Australia, people seem to be against donations. Even our daughter does not want us to be donors! I hope that you have a wonderful Christmas, and that not too many donations are used , as this will mean that some of the idiots who drive motor cars have for once used some sense!
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2017
God bless you Ricky and comfort you at this time. I think this is an amazing poem, and written with such feeling that it cannot be ignored! My wife and I are both organ donors, and cannot understand why, particularly in Australia, people seem to be against donations. Even our daughter does not want us to be donors! I hope that you have a wonderful Christmas, and that not too many donations are used , as this will mean that some of the idiots who drive motor cars have for once used some sense!
Comment Written 22-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2017
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Thanks Paul in the tri-state area of Delaware Pennsylvania South Jersey over 4,500 people in the year 2014 and waited for organ tissue donations in the form of a human kidney 99% got to go home and body bags when my son Jason died in 2003 58,000 people awaited Oregon's 10 years later 68000 today it's approaching a hundred thousand people waiting for organs throughout the United States and odds are they won't receive it because the odds of you becoming like my son Jason are greater than being eaten by great white shark in the Atlantic Ocean while being struck by lightning thanks and also have a nice holiday dr. Ricky 1024
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And you too Ricky, and may God bless you.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
T his speaks how lovingly the only son was cherished, grew up, died young, gifted his life for this world, how special was his life, dad allows a Christmas Gift to him; I liked. DR ALCREATOR (6-STAR)
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2017
T his speaks how lovingly the only son was cherished, grew up, died young, gifted his life for this world, how special was his life, dad allows a Christmas Gift to him; I liked. DR ALCREATOR (6-STAR)
Comment Written 22-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2017
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Thanks Creator and I would have expected nothing less from you you too have a merry holiday Christmas and a Happy New Year and a healthy one dr. Ricky 1024
Comment from jenintorre
Dear Ricky
Thank you so much for sharing these thoughts on your son Jason. My heart goes out to you.
I hope by writing this poignant piece it is bringing you some solace.
Blessings. Jen
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2017
Dear Ricky
Thank you so much for sharing these thoughts on your son Jason. My heart goes out to you.
I hope by writing this poignant piece it is bringing you some solace.
Blessings. Jen
Comment Written 22-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2017
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Thank you Jen and of course the pain never goes away from losing your son and then your wife committing suicide only 8 months later you put it in a place you hide it skeleton closet it change it up and pray to God it doesn't come back to haunt you again have a nice holiday dr. Ricky 1024