Coffee Gripe
A NooYawker speaks his mind.2 total reviews
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
This meets the contest requirements splendidly. This is really a refreshing and clever approach to the contest. I love the quaint dialog used and the overall gruff New York kind of tone. I wish you all the best in the voting and thank you very much for sharing it.
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This meets the contest requirements splendidly. This is really a refreshing and clever approach to the contest. I love the quaint dialog used and the overall gruff New York kind of tone. I wish you all the best in the voting and thank you very much for sharing it.
Comment Written 11-Dec-2017
Comment from Meia (MESAYERS)
Cawfee in a diner, ain't what it usta be --
with beautyful waitresses waitin' on me.
They knew what it meant to be wit a gent,
with lotsa attention, and keepin' my glass fulla water.
I'd say thanks, pay 'em the dime, and tip 'em a quarter.
Them days is long gone, but the mem'ries remain -
when cawfee was betta, and not such a pain.' I loved this and hope it does well in the competition the brooklyn accent was perfect and added an old world charm and fun to your work. I really enjoyed this poem on the subject of coffee the best I have read so far, before coffee became commercialised and branded as it is today. kindest regards Meia x
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Cawfee in a diner, ain't what it usta be --
with beautyful waitresses waitin' on me.
They knew what it meant to be wit a gent,
with lotsa attention, and keepin' my glass fulla water.
I'd say thanks, pay 'em the dime, and tip 'em a quarter.
Them days is long gone, but the mem'ries remain -
when cawfee was betta, and not such a pain.' I loved this and hope it does well in the competition the brooklyn accent was perfect and added an old world charm and fun to your work. I really enjoyed this poem on the subject of coffee the best I have read so far, before coffee became commercialised and branded as it is today. kindest regards Meia x
Comment Written 11-Dec-2017
