Playing A Critical Roll
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Comment from Brigitte Elko
This made me chuckle and I remembered outhouses in Germany where I grew up. There was never any toilet paper. It isn't easy to write such a humorous tale in 17 syllables but you managed very well. The picture is wonderful to accompany your words.
Fan Friend,
Brigitte
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2017
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This made me chuckle and I remembered outhouses in Germany where I grew up. There was never any toilet paper. It isn't easy to write such a humorous tale in 17 syllables but you managed very well. The picture is wonderful to accompany your words.
Fan Friend,
Brigitte
Comment Written 28-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2017
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Thanks for your nice review. It was a blind competition so I did not answer right away and then I forgot. I'm 69, it happens. Anyway, my goal in writing is to bring smiles and even laughter and I'm glad my poem did that, but did awful in the contest. You just never know. Anyway, write on! Merry Christmas.
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Merry Christmas to you,also. I didn't do well either in the contest either but that's okay.
Blessings,
Brigitte
Comment from Sharon Haiste
This is a good entry for the Write a Humorous 5-7-5 writing prompt.
It is funny and tells an age old story.
Well done and good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2017
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This is a good entry for the Write a Humorous 5-7-5 writing prompt.
It is funny and tells an age old story.
Well done and good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon
Comment Written 28-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2017
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Thanks for your nice review. It was a blind competition so I did not answer right away and then I forgot. I'm 69, it happens. Anyway, my goal in writing is to bring smiles and even laughter and I'm glad my poem did that, but did awful in the contest. You just never know. Anyway, write on! Merry Christmas.