Comment from kahpot

Excellent

Yes this story is getting very interesting, and your writing is very intriguing, I will have to go back and read all these in order, very well done****kahpot

 Comment Written 28-Nov-2017

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reply by the author on 28-Nov-2017

Why thank you k a h p o t for this interesting review dr. Ricky 1024

Comment from kiwigirl2821

Excellent

Hello Ricky. This one has too much violence for me Ricky. I read it but, must have missed some chapters as it just bled violence ... There are a few grammar and spelling mistakes but, otherwise well written. xoxo Kiwi

 Comment Written 27-Nov-2017

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reply by the author on 27-Nov-2017

Yes this is the third version of the house on the street series the first one talks about John Senior his life is family and little does his wife and the police know that he was the actual murder in the situation of his own family we don't find that until he kills another family so he actually marries twice and kills everybody twice now he does remarry a third time and he is passed away since then the police catch up with him and kill him after he is able to beat the rap they can't handle the fact he gets away with it so we're now with the son John Burns Jr and we will see what will happen in the minds of a silly silly serial killers and Mind of a serial killer son we'll find out if it's like father like son thanks stuck to Ricky 1024

Comment from Liberty Justice

Excellent

Ricky, I mean this in a good way, a respectable manner: From what planet do you hail from? You have one of the wildest most creative minds in the world. Did you call Hollywood, yet? Seriously! Your horror story is filled with suspense and various mystery plots and has great shock value. truly, liberty justice WELL DONE.

 Comment Written 26-Nov-2017

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reply by the author on 27-Nov-2017

Thanks for that darling I'm actually at this moment in time going to call The Gift of Life at 1 800 owners one talk to my friend Laura and see if she has heard anything from ABC Studios and Kelly and Ryan Seacrest I'm trying to get on the show with Laura that representative The Gift of Life in Philly to promote my gift of Life Book maybe I'll promote death later on with Hollywood but right now it's all about life for me thanks talk to Ricky 1024

reply by Liberty Justice on 27-Nov-2017

Yes, Rickly, I always enjoy talking to you. GO FOR IT. HOLLYWOOD HOLLYWOOD
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Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin

Excellent

Hi, Ricky

= Goodness. With the woman being nude, bludgeoned, raped, and gutted, does not lead any doubt she is a goner.
= Gruesome one--but a fast read. Well done.

Cheers, J
*** Merry Christmas & Happy New Year! ***
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 Comment Written 26-Nov-2017

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reply by the author on 27-Nov-2017

Thanks Jacqueline as we start to dig deeper into the mind of a child who suffered through the mind of a serial killer we will soon realize it as father like son thanks for your time as usual Ricky and 24

Comment from Thomas Bowling

Excellent

Why didn't you enter this in the horror poetry contest? MAybe you did. Let me check Nope it's not there. It might have done pretty well. It's too late now. You have to enter it before you post it.

 Comment Written 26-Nov-2017

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reply by the author on 26-Nov-2017

The contests?
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Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear

Excellent

This speaks in continuation of the same horror and haunted house at the end of the street where the poet visited and found new series of haunting and horror presence of soul; nightmares continue; I like DR ALCREATOR

 Comment Written 26-Nov-2017

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reply by the author on 26-Nov-2017

Thanks So Craetor.
Dr.Ricky
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