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Comment from mermaids
You tell a tale here in poetic form. The characters are real and you hold the reader's interest. You also give a voice to this man who was killed by the police. I am looking forward to the next chapter.
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2017
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You tell a tale here in poetic form. The characters are real and you hold the reader's interest. You also give a voice to this man who was killed by the police. I am looking forward to the next chapter.
Comment Written 27-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2017
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Hi dear I just finished it and there is a shocking ending let's just say woman power rules doctor Ricky 1024
Comment from Meia (MESAYERS)
This is scary Ricky and I would love to see it continue! Best of luck this was excellent and I enjoyed every bit of god bless you Ricky and may you continue to write excellent work well done and kindest regards Meia x
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2017
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This is scary Ricky and I would love to see it continue! Best of luck this was excellent and I enjoyed every bit of god bless you Ricky and may you continue to write excellent work well done and kindest regards Meia x
Comment Written 27-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2017
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The conclusion is today the first part presented the second part coming soon talk to Ricky 1024 thanks Mia you're a doll
Comment from Nika2016
I like this, Ricky. We have at least three stories going on here .John Sr. John Jr. and the domestic life of the investigator...What will happen next? We will find out in the next part...
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2017
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I like this, Ricky. We have at least three stories going on here .John Sr. John Jr. and the domestic life of the investigator...What will happen next? We will find out in the next part...
Comment Written 27-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2017
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You're very right Nikki I will conclude this sometime today with a very second special piece another special picture which will be my own artwork and we're going to see if Justice will finally get served in a Burns family of serial killers talk to Ricky 1024
Comment from Thomas Bowling
Again, you should have entered it in the contest. If you want the benefit of talented writer's feedback, you have to go where your work will be seen.
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2017
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Again, you should have entered it in the contest. If you want the benefit of talented writer's feedback, you have to go where your work will be seen.
Comment Written 26-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2017
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The first made the welcome page.
There are Two more.
The Original "House at the End of the Street Street" this one..
"The House at the End of the Street Again.:
And, "The House at the End of the Street Street 2017(B):
The latest...
A reviewer said they would make for a great movie?
Ask and tell your friend Dean Kuch?
Thanks
Doc Rick...
Comment from kahpot
An excellent read, I would change " He was severly beatened" to severely beaten, as this would make it read a lot more fluently, this story is very well written****kahpot
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2017
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An excellent read, I would change " He was severly beatened" to severely beaten, as this would make it read a lot more fluently, this story is very well written****kahpot
Comment Written 26-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2017
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Thanks kahpot.
I talk into the phone for there is no Wi-Fi for my Acer.
Spell check is to small to read.
You need a magnifying glass!
House at the End of the Street Street 2017(B)is now available.
Ricky
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Thank you for realizing I do not mean to hinder but only to help****kahpot
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This speaks the story of John Burns who was murdered by police, poet has received an assignment for investigation at his own about the murder and the house at the end of the street in question; facts reveal now; I like DR ALCREATOR (6-STAR)
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2017
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This speaks the story of John Burns who was murdered by police, poet has received an assignment for investigation at his own about the murder and the house at the end of the street in question; facts reveal now; I like DR ALCREATOR (6-STAR)
Comment Written 25-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2017
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Honey thanks I'll Creator and wait till you find out what happens tomorrow and the following conclusion of course will be on Monday let's just say it will be a Christmas treat after Ricky 1024
Comment from Liberty Justice
Very suspenseful, indeed, Dr. Ricky. John Burns, the serial killer, was a horrible man. Science studies to see what makes serial killers. You describe his escapades and history of his life as a child in great spinning details. TAKE VERY VERY GOOD CARE OF YOURSELF. WELL DONE. lol liberty justice
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2017
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Very suspenseful, indeed, Dr. Ricky. John Burns, the serial killer, was a horrible man. Science studies to see what makes serial killers. You describe his escapades and history of his life as a child in great spinning details. TAKE VERY VERY GOOD CARE OF YOURSELF. WELL DONE. lol liberty justice
Comment Written 25-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2017
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Thanks darling you seem to remember dwell the beginning peace that was the first half of the first piece now this was the first third of the second piece which is for the present time with his son but the question is is his son going to be a killer like its father he seems that he hated it when he was younger dr. Ricky 1024
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Ricky your works are fantastic. Seriously, have you ever called Hollywood and tried to get movie agent or script agent to consider using your scripts in a Hollywood movie? lol liberty justice
