Greed in Paradise
Senryu2 total reviews
Comment from B.B. Rose
Your content has nicely summed up a topical issue that certainly demonstrates one of mankind's worst attributes. I don't believe greed constitutes an emotion, however.
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2017
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Your content has nicely summed up a topical issue that certainly demonstrates one of mankind's worst attributes. I don't believe greed constitutes an emotion, however.
Comment Written 25-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2017
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Yes thanks for reading and for spotting that greed doesn't constitute an emotion...that's one of the pluses of being on a writing site ..some fellow writer will help to keep us on the straight and narrow..zanya
Comment from Sharon Haiste
A good entry for the Senryu Poetry writing prompt.
The combination of the picture and poem really relay the message well.
Well done and good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2017
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A good entry for the Senryu Poetry writing prompt.
The combination of the picture and poem really relay the message well.
Well done and good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon
Comment Written 25-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2017
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Thanks for reading and critique zanya
