Comment from robyn corum

Excellent

Dear Mystery Writer,

What a sweet and eloquent goodbye to someone special. --sigh-- It's so hard to lose a loved one, but in some instances, it seems to offer them relief. Hope that was the case here.

Some notes:
1.) Woman (Remembered) --> missing the 'm' (in your title)

2.) voice spoke a loving elegy
--> curious about your choice of word:
--> elegy = 'a poem of serious reflection, typically a lament for the dead.'
--> eulogy = 'a speech or piece of writing that praises someone or something highly, typically someone who has just died.'

Thanks and good luck!

 Comment Written 25-Nov-2017

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reply by the author on 26-Nov-2017

Thanks for the read and the catch. I debated about elegy or eulogy and decided elegy was better because the speech given was really a missing or a lament for the woman who passed.

Comment from clsandau

Excellent

This is a good emotional write. Lots of great descriptions in there. I particularly liked the last verse, it was a great ending knowing that "hooking" was her thing to do. Good luck in the contest. Carol

 Comment Written 25-Nov-2017

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reply by the author on 26-Nov-2017

Thanks for the read and the comments.