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No battledress

5/7/5 political

2 total reviews 
Comment from Sharon Haiste
Excellent
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This is a good entry for the 5-7-5 Political poem contest.
You definitely have a clear story here.
Good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon

 Comment Written 24-Nov-2017


reply by the author on 28-Nov-2017
    Thanks for a great review .. democracy is in danger with a whole set of new threats....zanya
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
Excellent
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This speaks about practice of democracy today as the point of view gives us the fallen status of leaders like that of being in the battle without a battledress of a soldier; I liked the coverage.

 Comment Written 24-Nov-2017


reply by the author on 28-Nov-2017
    Thanks for reading and critique zanya