I and my husband, Robert
Viewing comments for Chapter 6 "Down to a near skeleton."A prayer, then the walk through our marriage.
9 total reviews
Comment from Irish Rain
I've had pneumonia 12 times. I know how serious that can be. I pray your husband will recover. God bless the both of you, miracles happen.
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2017
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I've had pneumonia 12 times. I know how serious that can be. I pray your husband will recover. God bless the both of you, miracles happen.
Comment Written 25-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2017
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Thanks for your kind revew, Ine. Have a blessed and nice Sunday.
Comment from Liberty Justice
BEST WISHES AND MY PRAYERS GO OUT TO YOU AND YOUR HUSBAND! You stated this is a true horror poem and your words of vivid descriptions of set backs with cancer are emphasized by that photo. Has he stopped smoking? truly, liberty justice
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2017
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BEST WISHES AND MY PRAYERS GO OUT TO YOU AND YOUR HUSBAND! You stated this is a true horror poem and your words of vivid descriptions of set backs with cancer are emphasized by that photo. Has he stopped smoking? truly, liberty justice
Comment Written 25-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2017
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Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a lovely and blessed Sunday. No, we both still smoke.
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WHAT?? WHY?? You know they make cigarette patches one can put on your shoulder to help you stop smoking, and they even make electronic cigarettes to help stop smoking urges. Is this a true writing? My sympathies! truly, liberty justice
Comment from Poetic Friend
Wow, you did an excellent job telling the story about your husband Robert and the origin of his illness.
The sentences are rather short, but effective.
I hope he feels better soon.
Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2017
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Wow, you did an excellent job telling the story about your husband Robert and the origin of his illness.
The sentences are rather short, but effective.
I hope he feels better soon.
Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 25-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2017
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Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a lovely and blessed Sunday.
Comment from Meia (MESAYERS)
Now two bactories love sites of his lungs.
The first treated before the back operation.
Many chest infections.
Acutely admitted to Emmen Hospital.
Still critical. ' SO awful because it it true. I pray for him and may God ease his mercy and bring him hope. You too with all my best regards Meia xx
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2017
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Now two bactories love sites of his lungs.
The first treated before the back operation.
Many chest infections.
Acutely admitted to Emmen Hospital.
Still critical. ' SO awful because it it true. I pray for him and may God ease his mercy and bring him hope. You too with all my best regards Meia xx
Comment Written 25-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2017
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Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a lovely and blessed Sunday. Thanks Meia.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This speaks how poet's husband had a change in symptoms after he had a stomach cancer and how a dear doctor could treated him and continued to keep control of him to go downwards; I liked.
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2017
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This speaks how poet's husband had a change in symptoms after he had a stomach cancer and how a dear doctor could treated him and continued to keep control of him to go downwards; I liked.
Comment Written 24-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2017
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Thanks for your kind review, Ine.. Have a great weekend.
Comment from royowen
Is this true Ine? The diagnosis of stomach cancer? This story does indeed qualify as an entry in this horror story contest, I hope things are ok now my friend, well done, good luck, blessings, Roy
Typo : T(h)en back to the Netherlands.
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2017
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Is this true Ine? The diagnosis of stomach cancer? This story does indeed qualify as an entry in this horror story contest, I hope things are ok now my friend, well done, good luck, blessings, Roy
Typo : T(h)en back to the Netherlands.
Comment Written 24-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2017
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Thanks for your kind review, Ine.. Have a great weekend. Yes true.
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Most welcome
Comment from Eternal Muse
A very interesting rendition of the contest. You described horrific circumstances and yet pour a dash of humor into it. I liked it very much. It's hard to be humorous about things like that, but it came out very well.
I wish you luck in the contest. One minor thing: Your text color font was a bit jarring to my eyes. Perhaps a darker color could be considered.
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2017
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A very interesting rendition of the contest. You described horrific circumstances and yet pour a dash of humor into it. I liked it very much. It's hard to be humorous about things like that, but it came out very well.
I wish you luck in the contest. One minor thing: Your text color font was a bit jarring to my eyes. Perhaps a darker color could be considered.
Comment Written 24-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2017
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Thanks for your kind review, Ine.. Have a great weekend.
Comment from Neonewman
Sorry to hear about his diagnosis, cancer is one of the ugliest words in our vocabulary. Please recount your words as it appears you may be over by a couple or so. They will give you a kickback, but allow to you fix it.
God bless!
Steve
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2017
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Sorry to hear about his diagnosis, cancer is one of the ugliest words in our vocabulary. Please recount your words as it appears you may be over by a couple or so. They will give you a kickback, but allow to you fix it.
God bless!
Steve
Comment Written 24-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2017
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Thanks for your kind review, Ine.. Have a great weekend.
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My pleasure
Comment from GSmuse
If we live long enough, most are faced with a horror prognosis about our health. It is sometimes harder for the caregiver (spouse) than for the patient. I have great
empathy for what you have gone through. My husband is not very well, but not terminal. Our lives are so fragile, we must treasure the time we have together.
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2017
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If we live long enough, most are faced with a horror prognosis about our health. It is sometimes harder for the caregiver (spouse) than for the patient. I have great
empathy for what you have gone through. My husband is not very well, but not terminal. Our lives are so fragile, we must treasure the time we have together.
Comment Written 24-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2017
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Thanks for your kind review, Ine.. Have a great weekend.
