Comment from Kingsrookviii

Exceptional

This deserves a six for so many reasons, my friend. Oddly, since I don't review much, I reciprocated at your request and found that this is something that has been on my mind a lot and I never could have written this as you did. I love the way that you did present this and the perspective necessary. I feel like people shun the Dark Evil, you know "evil" with the big "E." Folks these days focus upon the atrocities and deeds manifested by the Evil One and spread blame as far as the number of opinioned peoples, misguided though they are, at large. Anyway, what I mean is that it isn't just God that is being forgotten and ignored, but the Devil himself. People are confused and that means chaos and play directly into the plans to ruination. Faith is a hard sell these days and we are tested all of the time. Tonight I am here at a last to write and in incredibly deep darkness and I cling to it hoping tomorrow will be better. It is all because I am under attack, so here in my bunker, while I cannot write, I found this. Amazing. Thank you. Well done. Bruce.

 Comment Written 26-Nov-2017

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reply by the author on 26-Nov-2017

My pleasure to write this for not only you King but also for all the other reviewers that took the time to appreciate it based on my seven laws adjudication of course based on the seven deadly sins starting with drugs and addictions going to the tobacco industry the oil industry as are sucking up the cord blood of this Earth and pruning all the environment the banking industry that are robbing Us blind for mortgages and credit cards telecommunications that are also tapping the Airways that were meant for free to the general world and for a little bit of Labor they charged us a lot of money the lack of monopolization laws it went out in the 80s so there's giants like Wal-Mart Home Depot that are ruining small town business and of course the very last but most importantly lack of religion talk to Ricky 1024

Comment from Rasmine

Excellent

Hello,

I really liked you giving FanStory and Tom roles in your poem -- and Dean:
Did I forget to mention that the Administrator of this site FanStory (no comma), and Tommy Boy is also under my command?"
"Just look up the word "Horror" and then you will see...
"All the works by Dean Kuch from me!"

"For, you are my Puppet and I am Your Puppetear!" (puppeteer)

Take care
...

 Comment Written 25-Nov-2017

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reply by the author on 25-Nov-2017

Thanks razman glad you enjoyed it and I knew and I had a feeling that Puppeteer was wrong but if I could have done a visual with a tear and it's alright I would have been perfect with the t e a r but thanks for the info I'll fix it dr. Rickyrc

Comment from Sharon Haiste

Excellent

Well done.
The picture that you have posted her is freaky.
The story/poem in interesting and easy to follow despite being all dialogue.
Thank you for sharing this.
Sharon

 Comment Written 24-Nov-2017

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reply by the author on 25-Nov-2017

Thanks for enjoying this quality controversial talk about the evils of Satan and how he controls our Earth today

Comment from Liberty Justice

Excellent

Seems evil puppet master has some sort of power. That photo is wild with that distorted face, but she has some type of power and says she controls people and their action. What a scary thought to know! Take care of yourself, Ricky, and watch what you eat, and don't eat harsh things that will irritate your stomach and intestines. lol truly, liberty justice

 Comment Written 24-Nov-2017

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reply by the author on 25-Nov-2017

Thanks for enjoying this piece and your wonderful advice doctor Ricky 1024

Comment from BOO ghost

Excellent

"Riddle me this...
"Riddle me that...
"Who's afraid of that?"
"And yes!"
" I am...
"The Puppet Master!"
"And, I control all!"
Hilarious!
"Do as you may...
"Do as you can...
"But no!"
"You can't because your under...
"My FUC**** COMMAND!"
"Whom am I ?"

Man likes control and power. Despicable and deplorable people. said Clinton.
BOO-tastic!`

 Comment Written 24-Nov-2017

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reply by the author on 24-Nov-2017

Feel like this Boo Ghost check out the house at the end of the street and the house at the end of the street again one of them's on the welcome and page and the other ones on the way of getting recognized the Blue Ribbon you have to read them in order though so read the one that has the character list first at the beginning which is the House at the End of the Street then afterwards read the conclusion to get the full effect the house at the end of the street again I think you'll enjoy it thanks dr. Ricky 1024

Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca

Excellent

Evil my dear friend but as to answer who or what, I am at a loss for an answer.
Love the way you include all that you did

 Comment Written 24-Nov-2017

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reply by the author on 24-Nov-2017

If you believe in heaven you gotta believe in hell if you believe in heaven you believe in heavenly father and his son Jesus Christ we believe in hell you believe in Satan and his many demons that are his son if you believe in heaven and hell then you do believe in right and wrong people even right and wrong then you going to go to the right place even if you send because our sins are forgiven each and every Sabbath sundae with just one sip of liquid in One Taste of bread or Cracker and were cleansed again for another week and then in before we leave a little tithing behind in the basket it all works well for everybody in the long run if you can imagine thanks in the city of course these words as the Latter Day Saint priest of the Church of Jesus Christ amen

Comment from evesayshi

Good

In my opinion, truly a remarkable piece, considering its style and errors. The construction is dramatic and forceful in content, strong and definitive in verbal tirade and yet, compelling in the reader's intent to read it to its end...

This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.

 Comment Written 24-Nov-2017

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reply by the author on 24-Nov-2017

Thanks Eve what I don't understand is you give it 4 stars when the reviewer after you gave it 5 and said she's going to review it and when she can do it properly with six stars and her name is Bridgit Elko I guess she recognizes true genius and you didn't but as a reviewer you have the right to whatever Stars you want to give and always remember what you give is what you get I never take Stars away for grammar or punctuation or anything like that my dear

reply by evesayshi on 24-Nov-2017

You are welcome indeed, Ricky, but I do not rate according to the opinion of others - I rate according to mine - I can do nothing more or less. We are all different, I am certain you can agree. What I give is what I get - that is not an acceptable comment. I review according to how I view a piece, which is the right thing to do ALWAYS! Grammar and punctuation are part of writing and deserve credit in any finished work. You are behaving like a bully with your threat, and that is simply not tolerated on this site, which you must know by now...Eve

Comment from Brigitte Elko

Excellent

This is awesome but will note rate at this point. I am out of sixes. This is a frightening tributary poem. We are all puppets but the question remains at whose command....has all will been lost. Your references to certain persons is unique and intriguing. Will come back and give a proper review next week.
Brigitte

 Comment Written 24-Nov-2017

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reply by the author on 24-Nov-2017

Thank You Bridget you're so sweet my dear love you dr. Ricky 1024

reply by Brigitte Elko on 24-Nov-2017

Awwww, am only a puppet and words pull my strings.
Brigitte

Comment from GSmuse

Excellent

You seem to be getting it all off your chest. I am assuming you are speaking of addiction at many levels. It's a bit scary to read your work and I just noticed that I should have been warned of the references to violence and language. You are a Brit. or at least I think you are? As an American, I feel more liberated and believe I am the Captain of my ship. We choose our destiny. That's my story and I'm stickin' to it.
Thank you. Your writing is controversial and is good to experience occasionally.

 Comment Written 24-Nov-2017

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reply by the author on 24-Nov-2017

Hi Gwendolyn.
Firstly,
there is a warning and also Awarning for graphic language You would notice it at the beginning of the piece.
...
"And, if you go and review it again..
You'll also notice that when I use any kind of lines that were foul...
"The letters that would complete it were changed into Stars.
Also I'm not from Britain I'm from New Jersey thanks talk to Ricky 1024 review coming through a cell phone would run in sentences possible grammar issues and no relations

reply by GSmuse on 24-Nov-2017

Why Margaret Thatcher in the illustration?

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

You made me laugh with your word: 'Un-united states', but why poor old Maggie, she was for me a great politician and Prime Minister and I only wish she would come back and sort this lot out over here, a fun write, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 24-Nov-2017

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reply by the author on 24-Nov-2017

Thanks doll you forgot to comment on the evil 666 approximate word count couple people said something about that it was perfect for the peace Ricky