Comment from Poetic Friend

Excellent

Wow, this is one of the best entires that I read in this contest. In its brevity, the poem describes one of the amazing experience for parents. The rhymes and the words were well chosen. Good word economy.

I hope you do well in this contest. Good luck!

 Comment Written 23-Nov-2017

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reply by the author on 24-Nov-2017

Hi Poetic Friend, Thanks for your encouraging words . sometimes it is difficult to get just the right words and feel even for these little poems. Your review is pleasing Cheers

Comment from Sharon Haiste

Excellent

So much said in such a few words, not easy to do, but you have mastered it.
The charcoal? is beautiful and a perfect match.
Well done and good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon

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 Comment Written 23-Nov-2017

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reply by the author on 24-Nov-2017

Hi Sharon, Thanks very much for your review and I liked this image also Cheers for your goood luck

Comment from H. Rebecca

Excellent

Thank you for an alternative to the example given for the contest. The syllables are in place, and it's just the time of year to be thinking of such subjects. Good luck in the contest!

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 Comment Written 23-Nov-2017

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reply by the author on 24-Nov-2017

Hi Rebecca, Thanks you for your review and good luck message. Always fun to try these ones Cheers