The Book of Fine Poetry
Viewing comments for Chapter 12 "Dreaming With You"A Collection of My best works.
5 total reviews
Comment from Abby Wilson-hand
AMAZING MIND YOU HAVE A GIFT TO WRITE
MY FRIEND EXCPECIALY WHEN WRITING ABOUT JAY
I LOVE TO READ OF YOUR SON
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2017
AMAZING MIND YOU HAVE A GIFT TO WRITE
MY FRIEND EXCPECIALY WHEN WRITING ABOUT JAY
I LOVE TO READ OF YOUR SON
Comment Written 23-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2017
-
Hi Abby thanks for this I appreciate it this is Jason's this is Jason's birth month so anything that I write is beautiful I wrote for a bishop and a pastor in charge of Ocean County and Monmouth County Church I went to that was a friend of mine to church there Assembly of God churches and he ate when I hand it to him I put it on one of my address labels on it and the guy he was 35 years the head Pastor for Ocean County Medical and 46 years for Ellis County prosecutor's office so when he wrote me back and thanked me for the beautiful poem I gave them that was very special and I'm not a pastor on the Latter Day Saint priest of the Church of Jesus Christ and now he he wrote To Me Pastor Richard smrokowski so maybe one day I will be meant to have my own church I always dreamed about that God gave me this gift and I love light writing everything but on Sundays are so basically religious thanks again and I hope you enjoyed your Thanksgiving
-
that would make an excellent story
Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin
Hi, Ricky
= I like that this comes from Jay's POV.
= Through your writing, he is telling you, "It's okay, Dad, I'm okay."
= Beautifully written, my friend.
Cheers, J
*** HAPPY HOLIDAYS! ***
(*<*) A Smile Is Just A Frown Turned Upside-down. (*<*)
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2017
Hi, Ricky
= I like that this comes from Jay's POV.
= Through your writing, he is telling you, "It's okay, Dad, I'm okay."
= Beautifully written, my friend.
Cheers, J
*** HAPPY HOLIDAYS! ***
(*<*) A Smile Is Just A Frown Turned Upside-down. (*<*)
Comment Written 22-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2017
-
Thanks Jackson as you take it the Gulf of your wine or sip of your milk and eat the turkey we must always be thanks for the giving to the Lord for what we still have here behind and I say these things of course in the name of Jesus Christ amen
Comment from H. Rebecca
I believe dad should be capitalized. It is at the end, but not all the way through. At the end you will have rainbow C. Is this a typo or stylistic choice?
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2017
I believe dad should be capitalized. It is at the end, but not all the way through. At the end you will have rainbow C. Is this a typo or stylistic choice?
Comment Written 22-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2017
-
Yes to see wasn't meant to be there if it's talk through a cell phone of course and I do capitalize important words like God dad Life Death anything that's important to me thanks for your time and wonderful review doctor Ricky 1024
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
I know, I know, this is very emotional and very well done. Yes, yes fly always together and know he is there always. Nicely done
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2017
I know, I know, this is very emotional and very well done. Yes, yes fly always together and know he is there always. Nicely done
Comment Written 22-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2017
-
Thanks very much Barbara that's important coming from you considering your losses also Ricky
Comment from pbomar1115
The is a story of love by a father to a child. Remembering the deceased child has to be hard when both of you were close. I can't say that this is something I'm familiar with because I'm a single person. My heart goes out to you.
Phillip
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2017
The is a story of love by a father to a child. Remembering the deceased child has to be hard when both of you were close. I can't say that this is something I'm familiar with because I'm a single person. My heart goes out to you.
Phillip
Comment Written 22-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2017
-
The loss of a child is a parent's worst nightmare were meant to be buried our children not to have our children bury us but as I was writing this thinking of my son who gave his organs of course to save lives and and this is his birth month thanks for this review doctor Ricky 1024
-
You're welcome, Ricky.
Phillip