Comment from Kerry Foley

Excellent

lol, This is a cute poem on the Aardvark. You really do a terrific job on these silly animal poems, Bill. Well done. ~Kerry

 Comment Written 19-Nov-2017

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reply by the author on 19-Nov-2017

Thanks, Kerry

reply by Kerry Foley on 25-Nov-2017

Your welcome:)

Comment from BeasPeas

Excellent

LOL! You are on a roll, Bill. Aardvark series is my fav so far. Humorous, clever, and unique with good rhyming. I guess we should be grateful to Ardvarks for keeping the ant population in control. Marilyn

 Comment Written 19-Nov-2017

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reply by the author on 19-Nov-2017

Thanks, Marilyn, for the great encouragement. Bill

Comment from Teri7

Excellent

This is a very cute poem about Abraham Aardvark you have penned. You told a very cute story in your poem with great imagery from the art work! Blessings, Teri

 Comment Written 19-Nov-2017

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reply by the author on 19-Nov-2017

Thanks, Teri

Comment from nomi338

Excellent

Sounds like me and potato chips. Potato chips, potato chips, why do I love you so? Hell I don't know, I just do. It is true, it is true. I fear that old Abraham and I may suffer the very same fate. Brought down because of the excessive amount of food that we ate.

 Comment Written 19-Nov-2017

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reply by the author on 19-Nov-2017

The thing I hate about termites is that the bag they come in is half air.

Comment from damommy

Excellent

Holy cow! That should keep him well fed for a while. Seeing that drove all thoughts of cholesterol out of his mind. lol

Cute. I enjoyed reading it.

 Comment Written 19-Nov-2017

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reply by the author on 19-Nov-2017

Thanks, da

Comment from BOO ghost

Excellent

Wow! What a massive termite mound. The Aardvark could eat here for years. Got a chuckle out of this: He ate them freely with no care at all

about his rising cholesterol.
Well done,mate.
Cheers~
BOO~

 Comment Written 19-Nov-2017

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reply by the author on 19-Nov-2017

Thanks, BOO

Comment from marybell1

Excellent

I enjoyed reading your poem "Aardvark 4" I liked the story but the last two lines do not rhyme. Did yoju intend them to?.
All the best.
Marybell1.

 Comment Written 19-Nov-2017

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reply by the author on 19-Nov-2017

Thanks, MB. We'll agree to disagree..... co-les-ter-all ...

reply by marybell1 on 21-Nov-2017

As a reviewer I like to draw your attention to what may or may not be correct. I do take this seriously and I do not just glance over the poems for $$$$$.
Sincerely
Marybell1.

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

Lol! Good for him. I know he'd get great quantities of termites in tropical places like Hawaii. Even in concrete high rises, termites get into the cupboards there. Seems like insects would be low cholesterol and high protein. I understand if fried in oil, they can taste like bacon bits.

 Comment Written 19-Nov-2017

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reply by the author on 19-Nov-2017

They are mostly protein; that's probably why he's not worried. : )