Comment from BeasPeas

Excellent

Hi Bill. You are something else! Now we are into aardvarks, but I must say this is a whimsical and happy poem. I especially like the first three lines. Good job. Marilyn

 Comment Written 17-Nov-2017

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reply by the author on 18-Nov-2017

Thanks, Marilyn

Comment from nomi338

Excellent

And the amazed the crowd and each other as their creativity took wings and flew above the heads of those not ready for the heady rhythm and blues, colors and hues, which led to the tapping of toes, the bobbing of heads and everyone was entertained.

 Comment Written 16-Nov-2017

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reply by the author on 16-Nov-2017

Boy! That poem was better than I thought.

reply by nomi338 on 17-Nov-2017

never sell yourself short, Talouse. LOL.

Comment from Teri7

Excellent

Bill, This is a very cute ABC poem you have penned about Amos Aardvark. You used very cute descriptive wording and very good imagery with your words. Blessings, Teri

 Comment Written 15-Nov-2017

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reply by the author on 15-Nov-2017

Thanks, Teri

reply by Teri7 on 15-Nov-2017

you are so welcome!

Comment from DragonGeralyn

Good

Quirky, very amusing; a thoroughly enjoyable read. Nice bouncy flow that fits with the topic. Made me wish for more.

 Comment Written 15-Nov-2017

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reply by the author on 15-Nov-2017

Thanks, DG

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

Lol! I think it needs a picture but the picture in my head after reading the poem is quite funny enough. I just am not sure if the duchess is a duck or a humanoid duchess. Clever ABC even using names and measurements to keep up the alphabet structure.

 Comment Written 15-Nov-2017

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reply by the author on 15-Nov-2017

Thanks, lyenochka, for giving this a look. Bill