Comment from Sharon Haiste

Excellent

Ok, so that's pretty intense. I did not see that ending coming.
Well done. A lot said in a few words.
Good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon

 Comment Written 12-Nov-2017

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reply by the author on 18-Nov-2017

Thanks for reading and critique zanya

Comment from Mustang Patty

Excellent

Hi there;
Thank you so much for sharing this moving poem about the horrible effects of porn. Too many people ignore this addictive behavior when they list the things plaguing our society.

Good luck in the contest,

~patty~

 Comment Written 12-Nov-2017

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reply by the author on 18-Nov-2017

Yes sadly ...thanks for reading and critique zanya