Problem Resolution Changed the World
100-Word Story - Contest Entry2 total reviews
Comment from Ricky1024
This is a 100 word - poetry entry they still not here and Eve in the Garden of Eden was wonderfully written with great descriptive measures good luck with this doctor Ricky 1024
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2017
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This is a 100 word - poetry entry they still not here and Eve in the Garden of Eden was wonderfully written with great descriptive measures good luck with this doctor Ricky 1024
Comment Written 12-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2017
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Thank you for the excellent review, Ricky. Much appreciated.
Comment from Sis Cat
This is a fun creation story with a different take on Adam and Eve. Adam goes from living as a peaceful man of solitude in a garden to having a partner. These are my favorite lives:
He didn't happen to notice the very small physical difference between them. So, no hanky-panky. Yet.
Things do not turn out well, because his wife--the first wife--talks all of the time.
The only voice around seemingly never stopped. Soon Adam realized how peaceful the quiet was in the good old days.
The problem "was resolved with the voice of a snake."
This is a creative, imaginative 100 word story. I have read dozens in this contest and your story is among the best. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2017
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This is a fun creation story with a different take on Adam and Eve. Adam goes from living as a peaceful man of solitude in a garden to having a partner. These are my favorite lives:
He didn't happen to notice the very small physical difference between them. So, no hanky-panky. Yet.
Things do not turn out well, because his wife--the first wife--talks all of the time.
The only voice around seemingly never stopped. Soon Adam realized how peaceful the quiet was in the good old days.
The problem "was resolved with the voice of a snake."
This is a creative, imaginative 100 word story. I have read dozens in this contest and your story is among the best. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 11-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2017
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Thanks for the terrific review, Andre. it's very rewarding knowing my work is appreciated by a writer of your caliber.