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Comment from frogbook
A really polished and likely well know Walrus we have here. What a pic you found and you made the best of it with your clever comparisons in "walrus-speak."
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2017
A really polished and likely well know Walrus we have here. What a pic you found and you made the best of it with your clever comparisons in "walrus-speak."
Comment Written 09-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2017
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Thanks, FB, for the kind review. Bill
Comment from Ulla
hahaha, I love it,Bill. You have such a great imagination that I don't know what more to say. They won't let me get off with this comment. I loved your poem though. All the best. Ulla>)))
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2017
hahaha, I love it,Bill. You have such a great imagination that I don't know what more to say. They won't let me get off with this comment. I loved your poem though. All the best. Ulla>)))
Comment Written 09-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2017
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Thanks, Ulla, for the kind review. Bill
Comment from nomi338
To my mind there are few things more funny than a trim walrus in a well tailored suit carrying a powerful weapon, drinking cocktails and just being debonair. Your imagination know no boundaries obviously. This is a handy tool for a writer who delves into the absurd. Good work.
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2017
To my mind there are few things more funny than a trim walrus in a well tailored suit carrying a powerful weapon, drinking cocktails and just being debonair. Your imagination know no boundaries obviously. This is a handy tool for a writer who delves into the absurd. Good work.
Comment Written 09-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2017
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Thanks, nomi. The suit names the ...man.
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Got it.
Comment from Gloria ....
I always love a double OH nine Walrus particularly because of how he enjoys his martinis.
A most unique post and also poetic form.
Thanks for the share.
Gloria
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2017
I always love a double OH nine Walrus particularly because of how he enjoys his martinis.
A most unique post and also poetic form.
Thanks for the share.
Gloria
Comment Written 08-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2017
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Thanks, Gloria
Comment from BeasPeas
Hi Bill. This is a humorous walrus poem. I like this one the best so far. There are some good lines and rhyming within and clever wording. An enjoyable read. Marilyn
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2017
Hi Bill. This is a humorous walrus poem. I like this one the best so far. There are some good lines and rhyming within and clever wording. An enjoyable read. Marilyn
Comment Written 08-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2017
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Thanks, Marilyn.
Comment from damommy
I'd like to hear him say, 'James. James Walrus.' LOL
Love the tuxedo and the fact that he like fish ball martinis. Very funny.
Where did you get this picture? Did you draw it? Cute.
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2017
I'd like to hear him say, 'James. James Walrus.' LOL
Love the tuxedo and the fact that he like fish ball martinis. Very funny.
Where did you get this picture? Did you draw it? Cute.
Comment Written 08-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2017
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I think that would be...
Walrus, James Walrus
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You're right. lol
Comment from Ellie707
What an interesting take-off on Agent 007. This poem is funny and I sense the author enjoys the spoofs as much as the reader. He did a good job at rhyming.
Wonderful poem.
Ellie
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reply by the author on 08-Nov-2017
What an interesting take-off on Agent 007. This poem is funny and I sense the author enjoys the spoofs as much as the reader. He did a good job at rhyming.
Wonderful poem.
Ellie
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Comment Written 08-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2017
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Thanks, Ellie, for the kind review. Bill
Comment from Teri7
O.K. Now this is a cute little poem about a CIA Walrus or something like that. You used very cute descriptive wording and great imagery with the art work. It was cute to read and review. Blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2017
O.K. Now this is a cute little poem about a CIA Walrus or something like that. You used very cute descriptive wording and great imagery with the art work. It was cute to read and review. Blessings, Teri
Comment Written 08-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2017
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Thanks, Teri
Comment from Sharon Haiste
Another good one. Well done.
Well written and nicely rhymed. Paints a clear and funny picture.
It's nice to give a lighter side to some of the serious things in life.
Thank you for sharing this one.
Sharon
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2017
Another good one. Well done.
Well written and nicely rhymed. Paints a clear and funny picture.
It's nice to give a lighter side to some of the serious things in life.
Thank you for sharing this one.
Sharon
Comment Written 08-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2017
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Thanks, Sharon.
Comment from lyenochka
Lol! You have such a quirky sense of humor! I don't like 007 movies in general but he sure does have a whole lot of cool tools. But I still think I'd prefer the batmobile.
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2017
Lol! You have such a quirky sense of humor! I don't like 007 movies in general but he sure does have a whole lot of cool tools. But I still think I'd prefer the batmobile.
Comment Written 08-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2017
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I couldn't find a walrus in a Batman suit.